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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/13 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh Howie! I wish Leigh would do that what you thought she would do. I hope you're safe until the next chapter. :)

PS: The divider thing in the van made sense. I was thinking of those vans without a divider and thought AJ and Brian were sitting side by side.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think that's what most people pictured at first too. There will still be some inaccuracies as you read when it comes to the van just whistle and overlook! lmao

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/13 12:25 am Title: Chapter 6

Awe damn Howie and Kevin are gonna be attacked by wolves or something??? I am playing catch up. You're on a roll with this, I am proud and happy you're writing again, this story is so intriguing and I can't wait to see what Tim will do to Nick.

Author's Response:

There might be wolves out there wanting to attack. Perhaps! And thanks, Tracy! It really feels great to be back! :O)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh crap! That's the last thing Howie needs right now!



Author's Response:

I know! Poor Howie! LOL I am kind of mean to him in this one! :O( Well I guess I'm mean to all of them in this one.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Nooo the wolves can't get Howie either!  How's he going to see the way without his flashlight?  He's going to end up lost in the woods and getting mauled by animals :(

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: LOL The chapter in which Howie gets slowly mauled by animals I might need your help with! I mean I don't think I could be as graphic as I would need to be. Poor Howie! :O(

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 07:47 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh gosh, poor Howie was about to get eaten by the wolves! lol
I'm close to say that, maybe, the wolves are gonna be my favorite characters. LOL

Amazing chapter!

Author's Response: I almost named this chapter, "And It's Howie with the Wolves" Sung to the tune of "Hungry Like the Wolf!" lmao poor Howie.

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 05:21 am Title: Chapter 6

Love the new chapter,can't wait to read more and find out what is happening with all the guys.

"Of course since Nick always ended up trying to copy everything Kevin did." Hahaha! And the hair of the brow incident in 98, I can only imagine;)

Author's Response: I am sure at one point, Nick had to consider nairing Kevin's brows. LOL! Thanks, Kim!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 05:21 am Title: Chapter 6

WOLF WOLF WOLF! Or bear?! LMAO I won't rest until there's an animal attack! Knowing you, it's probably just an angry groundhog. I like how you let Howie be the hero in this one, but I also like how he's a realistic hero - afraid of being out in the dark woods by himself, constantly questioning his decisions, etc. That is totally how I would be in this situation, too. Glad to see you're still on a roll with this!

Author's Response: How about a plague carrying rabid squirrel? Would that work for you? Howie is trying so hard to be a hero and I would do the same thing too if I were him. I feel bad for him because even though I didn't write it that way, I pictured Howie dropping the flashlight and screaming like a girl as he flailed his arms and ran into the woods. I was like "Hrmm maybe I won't describe what I'm seeing for this scene!" lmao Thanks, Julie!

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 02:42 am Title: Chapter 6

I love how you place the 'events' as thought out in Howie's mind.
. I can picture him stumbling along in the darkness. Good chapter.....you always leave me waiting anxiously for more!!

Author's Response: Woot! Glad to hear it! I'll be updating again tomorrow. I have a lot of momentum with this one, something that hasn't happened in a very long time! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 6

So now Howie's going to get eaten by wolves, too? Or is this the big grizzly bear?

Author's Response: You know, there just might be some kind of wolves take over the world conspiracy going on, perhaps. Besides why should Kevin be the only one to be eaten? I mean the woods are pretty big there's plenty of room for wolves to roam around. LOL If that even is a wolf and not just Howie's imagination. :OP