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Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/14 01:29 am Title: Chapter 21

You're chapters are reminding me of George RR Martin's chapters or even Dan Brown's chapters where you love to leave the reader hanging. Luckily for me, I didn't have to wait a day to find out what's happening next!!!

Author's Response: I have never read anything by George RR Martin, but yes I do love my cliff hangers and it's something that people tend to hate about me. lol luckily though I kept my updates so regular they never were left hanging for too long. :O)

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/13 10:37 am Title: Chapter 21

Oh, damn! you wouldn't let the guys be saved that easily, would you, Mare? lol

Good story about Brian's faith... and I think I enjoyed them being scared to death. lol

Author's Response: Nope, why would I do that? lmao

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/13 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 21

I love me some wolves, but Tim is definitely the real threat here! I think I'd rather face a whole pack of wolves than him. Still, I'm a little disappointed that no one has had their leg ripped off by a wolf yet!

Author's Response: LMAO I knew you wouldn't be happy that no one was mauled. It's me though!! No gore!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/13 09:57 am Title: Chapter 21

WHAT THE HELL MARE??? You are killing me. first you make me want to cry with Brian, and then I feel horrible for Kevin...the boys are about to be puppy chow and now I am pissed cause psycho Tim shows up....where does that leave Nick and Howie? :( I want a van chapter next I guess. UGH!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, that sounds about right. LOL Since you are the only one that has voted and based on the reviews, I probably will go with a van chapter next. Maybe at least something will be resolved? Maybe lol Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/13 08:46 am Title: Chapter 21

What the hell?? He was just back at the cabin torturing Nick and Howie, now he's already there to kill them? Damnit! I was hoping he would drive up to do the deed and there would be a ton of cop cars there rescuing the guys. Now what are they going to do? They're sitting ducks with that psychopath. And if Tim's out there, where does that leave poor Nick and Howie? By they way, I don't like to see Nick fading so fast, not cool Mare...not cool. But other than that, can't wait for more. lol

Author's Response: That's the one thing that can be a little confusing about this story. Because they each have their own POV's most of the time they overlap which means the Howie POV chapter was taking place just around the same time Brian was losing faith but by the time the wolves show up, Tim was way on his way to see them. Not a lot of time has actually gone by in the context of the story, but because of all the POV's it may seem like days have gone by while actually it's only been hours. I did that just to add another surprise element like Tim seeming to just show up as fast as he did. LOL Thanks, Sam! :O)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/13 01:16 am Title: Chapter 21

Seriously, update now!!!! you can't leave us hanging at that. Tim saves them from the wolves only to say he has three bullets left to kill them too?????
We need to know how they are going to get out of this!

Author's Response: OMG I know, I'm seriously really mean, sorry about that! What's worse is the next update isn't even at the van. It's back at the cabin, but hey, shows do it all the time, right? And you usually have to wait an entire week for those! LOL Thanks, Kim!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/13 12:27 am Title: Chapter 21

Ooh! Tim could be eaten by wolves!

Author's Response: maybe?

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 21

Uh-oh... I'm not sure what is the better option.. being attacked by wolves or shot by Tim. If he's any good at it, at least it'd be quick and sorta painless, something that can't be said of a wolf attack.
But you'll better come up with something way better for our boys that doesn't involve death! Not even Tims' otherwise they are never gonna find Nowie!!
Very tense chapter, Mare!

Author's Response: Hrmm lol We shall see! The next chapter is another Nowie one, so maybe they're concocting their own plans! ;O) Thanks!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh crap! Please let the wolves come back and drag Tim away with them!

Author's Response: LMAO! I loved this!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 21

Arghhhhhhhhh now that is one mean cliffy Mare! I think I'd rather take my chance with the wolves than with Tim!

I think if I was Brian, I'd have lost faith too, not much is going their way at the moment :(

Can't wait for more, I was literally on the edge of my seat reading this chapter :)

Author's Response: Aww excellent about the edge of your seat comment and sorry about the cliffy but as you know when we get close to the end cliffies will be coming. LOL Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 21

OMG!! You're worse than Hannah with these dang cliffhangers!!!! Where are the damn police?!?!!

Author's Response: I've had quite a bit of practice with writing cliffies! Police might be on their way or mightn't be. LOL! Thanks, Jennay!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 21

Are they battling for winning the first place of who is the most unlucky? LOL Saved from the wolves just so to fall between the hands of crazy Tim. I don't know which fate is the worst, though. The wolves? LOL

Aside that, and I guess you already know, I loved this chapter. And I loved your Brian. He's the only one who can actually win against Kevin. LOL #TeamKentuckyCousins

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured being stubborn is in the genes. I know they are a pretty unlucky bunch, huh? AJ touches on that a little later, if he doesn't get killed first lol ;O) Thanks, Cinzia, I figured you'd enjoy this chapter.