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Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/14 11:15 am Title: Chapter 29

See this was one of those chapters that I almost felt sorry for Tim. But it didn't last long!

Author's Response: hehe

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/13 12:46 am Title: Chapter 29

Oh man, nice! When I saw the chapter title, I kind of envisioned it ending like this, but my heart still started beating a little faster at the end. I loved the "mood music" song choice. Oh, and also "She was my girlfriend. I married her after she died," brought it to a whole new level of messed up. Nicely done!

Author's Response: I thought "The Devil Went Down to Georgia" was nice and appropriate and a nod to a good friend as well! And yes, his dead wife brought things to a whole new creepy level! Thanks, Emily!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 29

OMG that is a mean cliffy...even for you lol!

That chapter was so full of excitement and suspense, but I also felt quite sorry for Tim. All those camping trips with his dad were just so cruel. It's no wonder he's so messed up with a father like that. Ugh, imagine being forced to do things like that, and not being able to do anything to stop it.

It's a shame Nick is so weak, I'd like to see him batter Tim over the head with that shovel!

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Aww I know! Poor Tim :O( I would be nice to see Nick regain his strength just long enough to bat him over the head with that shovel huh? Or even the fire poker! lmao Where are those pesky wolves when you need them?

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 10:33 am Title: Chapter 29

Nooooooo!!!!!!!!! Damn radio stations! lol

Tim's dad is beyond crazy. I hope he only lives in fiction world. I actually thought Tim's dad 'touched' him when they were in the camping ground. You were right, Mare, it's better not to know that secret. So he was killing someone while poor little Timmy was waiting for him during one of his birthdays. Crazy, sick person. I wonder if Tim's mom found out about this so she decided to take her life.

Can't wait for your update tomorrow. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I wouldn't go that route! It's one thing to make his dad a psycho killer, I find that less disturbing then him being a pedophile. LOL And yes, that's exactly what he was doing while Tim was waiting for his birthday presents. :O( If Tim's mom knew it would be a good enough reason to end her life I imagine, although you'll find out a bit more about her today. :O) Thanks, Ritz!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 10:02 am Title: Chapter 29

MARE. that was soooo mean!!! I had my suspicions about Tim's dad but WOW. Guess the apple didn't fall far from the tree there, eh? That picnic table where Howie was hiding had a body under it, I almost laughed at the irony of it all.

I love how calm Nick was, his acting was so good until the radio. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I know! Poor Howie was hiding on top of a body all night long! Yikes!! Tim's dad makes Tim look sane! And I think Nick is so ill at this point he can only be calm which helps because we know his real acting skills lol Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 08:29 am Title: Chapter 29

Just caught up on the last few chapters, so good!
I had a feeling that Nick wasn't going to make it to the hospital.
Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't going to make it that easy! Thanks, Kim! :O)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 04:35 am Title: Chapter 29

Oh no! :( I love the way you built slowly up to the end of this chapter, showing how Tim hated to be lied to, so that we could understand why it set him off so much to find out that Nick had lied to him about his true identity... and guess where he's going to be taking Nick. Yikes! I was not expecting Dad's secret to be THAT dark. No wonder Tim is so demented! I can't help but love him though. My favorite line of his in this chapter was “She was my girlfriend. I married her after she died.” I like how Nick's response was just "Okay." Smart Nick. He played his part well. Too bad the radio ruined everything! Great chapter!!

Author's Response: I actually laughed at that line and Nick's answer when writing it. LOL By this point Nick isn't even surprised by what comes out of Tim's mouth. We got really dark in this chapter, I didn't expect it to get that dark but as we went along there we were! Thanks, Julie!

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 02:38 am Title: Chapter 29

Aww No Tim better not hurt him!! I hope some how the FBI find Tim and Nick before Tim tries to off Nick! Can't wait rubric tomorrow for an update!!

Author's Response: We shall see! Thanks for reading. :O)

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/13 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 29

Geeeez!!! No wonder Tim is batshit crazy!! Who wouldn't be after that effed up childhood (and we thought Nick's childhood was bad! :P) I'll have to read tomorrow's update on the way to Nick's book signing..lol Can't wait for it tho!!!

P.S. Cliffys still SUCK!!!

Author's Response: Well that's weird to know you're going to see the real Nick while I'm making my fake Nick suffer. LOL! Tell him I said hello! And thanks, Jennay!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/13 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 29

I knew I should have waited until tomorrow, hoping to find out things would not be so bad, but nooooo, I just had to read it immediately. :(

Author's Response: I warned you it would be a bad cliffy. That should have been the first clue! LOL I'm glad you didn't wait! :O)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/13 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 29

No!!!!!!!!!! Tim is a nut job and Nick needs to get away fast. Someone needs to help!

Author's Response: That would be nice and I'm sure Nick agrees with you. LOL Thanks, Kyrie!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/13 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 29

I know I should be sorry for Nick (actually, I'm not... LOL) but... Tim ç_ç Poor Tim. #TeamTim
Did Howie shared his bad luck with Nick? LOL

Author's Response: I admit, I have no clue why anyone wouldn't feel sorry for Nick in this situation, but I am happy you do feel sorry for Tim because like he mentioned in the story, he's a victim too. Poor crazy guy. Thanks, Cinzia