Date: 09/29/13 07:38 am Title: Chapter 31
Awww poor Kevin and Howie feeling so guilty. I can understand why and I loved the part where Kevin kept saying no no no, I could really visualize how bad off Nick was.
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! I started to write out an answer then I realized I received this review from you yesterday as well, how odd. So I decided to respond to it anyway just in case you did send out chapter 32 feedback and this came to me instead or if it just randomly popped up twice for no reason. It has happened before but usually they show up one after the other. This one waited for hours LOL
Date: 09/28/13 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 31
Awww poor Kevin and Howie feeling so guilty. I can understand why and I loved the part where Kevin kept saying no no no, I could really visualize how bad off Nick was.
Author's Response: Aww thanks, Tracy! I'm glad the No no no part stuck out in people's minds.
Date: 09/28/13 11:30 am Title: Chapter 31
Go Howie!! I'm so glad he's going to confront him, hopefully it will all end well, with no one else getting hurt...well I won't mind if Tim does get that arrow through the heart :)
I think if Tim had treatment for his mental condition, he probably wouldn't have turned out the way he has. It's quite sad really.
Aw and poor Kevin, blaming himself for everything. I do love him!
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Aww, you want Tim to die? You know that will not make him very happy! :O( I agree with you about treatment. Maybe if he had some pills he wouldn't be bonkers. And poor Kevin! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 09/28/13 10:37 am Title: Chapter 31
first of all, yay for posting early. It's saturday afternoon here and I thought you'd be posting later (saturday evening for me). And another yay for tomorrow's update. :)
Howie-Kevin scenes are always a bit awkward for me, maybe because I see them both as the big brothers of the group and they supposed to comfort the younger ones not each other. But this chapter is good and actually worth the one week wait even though I was hoping for anothet interlude chapter, I'm dying to know what Pat and robert found out about timmy.
This will end soon? do you mind telling us how many chapters left? But if it will ruin the element of surprise, it's okay don't tell me. lol
Howie, I do believe in you. you might be able to knock out tim for a while but the three of you won't get far. Remember Nick passed out and Kevin's ankle is swollen. They're both 6 footer. lol
Author's Response: Howie and Kevin scenes are just as awkward to write for the very same reason but in this story I have tried to spread the love and bonding as much as possible to try to please everyone. You have your Brian, AJ, Kevin scenes and then Nick and Howie, and of course Nick and Kevin and now Howie and Kevin. Perhaps later some other pairings and bonding will occur but that was purposeful. As far as how many chapters, just one more! LMAO JUST KIDDING!! Honestly, I couldn't even answer that question if you wanted me to because I have no clue. I don't outline or anything I just have a vague idea of scenes etc... when I started this thing I thought I'd be done within 25 so shows you how much I know. An interlude might be coming soon! ;O) Thanks, Ritz!!
Date: 09/28/13 03:44 am Title: Chapter 31
Oh please don't let Tim kill them!
Author's Response: Listen to Kyrie, Tim!
Date: 09/28/13 01:59 am Title: Chapter 31
So chilling- the image of Tim carrying Nick and limp and lifeless back into the house, and Kevin saying "No..no..no..." I could almost literally see all of that happening. And go Howie! You can take him!
Author's Response: Thanks, Emily! I'm glad you found that part visual and I'm glad you have confidence in Howie! He would be happy to know that! :O) lol
Date: 09/27/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 31
I was so glad to see you posted early!
Of course I still love this story, but I really hope the guys will be alright. With every chapter I read, Tim's craziness seems to have increased immensely, but yet he remains likeable. So that's a big compliment coming your way, cause it means your writing skills rock!
Author's Response: Thanks for saying that!! :O) Yeah, Tim is flying a bit off the deep end. Poor guy! :0(
Date: 09/27/13 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 31
Dear Howie, all of your last plans didn't really go as planned. Should we be optmistic to think that maybe this time is going to be an exception? lol
Author's Response: Yeah, it's really not looking all that great is it? LOL
