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Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/13 03:32 am Title: Chapter 17

Ugh, that sucks. I was really hoping Howie'd manage to get away safely, but no, of course Tim had to find and threaten him. Poor guy. And I know I said it before (and many others with me): Tim is nuts!

Author's Response: Yes, Howie and freedom were not meant to be! But on the plus side, Nick will have some company and we know because of how he is feeling, he could use it. :O( Thanks, Nijntje!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/13 03:05 am Title: Chapter 17

Please tell me that Nick is ok!!!

Author's Response: aww, you're going to have to wait for a few chapters before the answer to that question, sorry! :O(

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/13 02:25 am Title: Chapter 15

*starts singing "hungry like the wolves".*

Seriously, you're making me like Kevin. lol I mean, I'd already had a soft spot for him but I love how he's always worried about the others. ç_ç
Now I'm so ready for the Kenutcky cousins against the wolves. LOL Because I'm pretty sure that Aj would stay behind and protect the food. LOL

Author's Response: Hey! If I can get anyone to like Kevin, I consider that quite an accomplishment. I know lots of people weren't very fond of him. His worry and care for all the others is what makes me actually love him as much as I do. And yeah, thinking that way about AJ is a pretty good assessment. Thanks, Cinzia! I was afraid you might have given up on this story. :O)

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 16

Aw, this was hard to read. I almost wish Nick wasn't so injured that he could put up more of a fight with this guy. It's hard to see him just...I hate to say giving up, but it's like watching him give up. Never thought I'd see him in that position, really sad though... : (

Author's Response: Aww I know what you mean, but you're right. He is giving up a little bit, poor guy but that's why I called it what I called it. They're all kind of hitting that critical point in their journeys right now. :O( Thanks, Sam!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 11:21 am Title: Chapter 16

Omg Mare this made me cry. Thr description was so.good and I felt hoe helpless he felt. Nick is dying :( I would guess internal bleeding because he feels so weak....the part about seeing freedom but being unable to reach it made me so sad :(

Author's Response: I got a little emotional when writing this one too in fact Howie and Nick have been getting to me in their later chapters. I can only imagine how frustrating it is to know he could just leave but can't move his legs to do it, although we saw how good that worked for Howie. Can you imagine Nick this sick and lost in the woods? I don't think I could even do that to him! LOL Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 10:51 am Title: Chapter 16

O_O WTH this guy gets creepier by the chapter. I'm enjoying the torture of course.....Nick starting to realize he maybe screwed health-wise. His cardiomyopathy dosen't help matters either! Scared to find out what creepy Tim will do next if he does or doesn't find Howie.

Love this story! You rock!!! :o)

Author's Response: I think it's so funny that we all enjoy the torture of these poor guys! LMAO Yes, his heart issues on top of this probably not a good thing. Howie is up next at some point today before I take a few days break due to school and real life stuff. Stupid real life! :O( Thanks, Carrie! I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 04:06 am Title: Chapter 16

I don't know what's worse. The fact that Nick is still being held, or that he's in such bad condition that he can't escape while knowing that he'd only have to get up and walk out. Why do you torture him like that? ;) (Like I haven't done similar things) Great chapter, Mare.

Author's Response: I know, I'm pretty mean but then again, like you said, we all are! LOL Thanks, Nijntje

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 02:26 am Title: Chapter 16

Someone needs to help Nick ASAP!

Author's Response: *nods* ;O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 01:52 am Title: Chapter 16

Well I'm glad Nick didn't get shot, but with those injuries he's got, maybe he'll wish he was dead if he continues to bleed internally :( I'm just hoping that a miracle will happen and Howie will save the day!

Poor boys :(

Author's Response: Super Howie!!! LOL He's next up! :O) Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 01:46 am Title: Chapter 16

Don't make this another one of those 1000 ways to kill Nick Carter, okay? The description of how Nick was feeling was SO good! You went into way more detail than I imagine most writers (myself included) would, and that's what made it so great. I am REALLY worried for Nick. "Oozing" is not good.

Author's Response: No worries, that's one thing you don't have to worry about with me. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed my description. I really wanted to make it clear what he was feeling and that it wasn't constant pain but more of a weird sensation going on.Yup, oozing probably not a good thing! Thanks, Emily!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 01:03 am Title: Chapter 15

Aw I loved hearing all the old stories of Nick's mischief, and they are right, if anyone can charm someone, it will be Nick :)

But what about those wolves? They are getting a bit too close for my liking, I hope no one gets eaten :(

Can't wait for more, was good to come home from a weekend away at my sister's to two chapters :)

Author's Response: EEk! I know, I had to bring back the wolves though! Glad you had fun at your sister's and I hope you're feeling better! I'm actually going to be updating very shortly! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 12:52 am Title: Chapter 14

That's exactly how my Holly got into BSB, through me playing their CDs and DVDs :) But she's a Nick girl like her mum, even if he is old enough to be her dad lol.

Well done Jennie for being so observant and taking the photo of Nick, at least she can be a little bit of help to the police now.

Exciting stuff!

Author's Response: Aww! I bet that's how a lot of the mini fans became fans! Thank goodness for camera phones, right? Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 02:09 am Title: Chapter 15

WOLF FOOD. the boys are so someone's dinner now ;) I love how Kevin and Brian were talking about all those memories because they wanted to keep positive and AJ just keeps confirming their sitiation by being cynical. Cant wait for a new chapter :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks! I do totally see AJ being a drama queen and not being able to edit himself. I also enjoyed writing those memories. Thanks, Tracy! I'll be updating again tomorrow (If I remember this time LOL)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 01:57 am Title: Chapter 14

YES someone gives me hope....while it was random, the fan was important after all. Hoping her mother listens to her.

Sorry for my lack of feedback, didn't get much chance to do anything this weekend and I am catching up now :)

Author's Response: No problem, Tracy! I think we're all getting busy now. Thanks for taking the time to read!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Just when I thought this was a chapter without much tension except for the "what if" thing, you make our boys nice wildlife food. Not good, Mare, not good. Not nice, either. :(

Author's Response: Well you know...like I just told Julie down there, those van guys have it too easy. They had food, water, shelter so it was time to throw them to the wolves! LOL Thanks, Nijnjte!