Date: 08/23/13 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
You've finally confirmed that Tim is a psycho!! What a horrible childhood! So many emotional scars.....so sad :( What injury does Nick have to his stomach? I have too many diagnoses to go on LOL. Great chapter. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Aww I know, I feel bad for Tim even though he's a nut. At least there's a reason for his madness. As far as Nick injury probably one of the things you're thinking is correct. LOL Thanks, Carrie!
Date: 08/23/13 05:12 am Title: Chapter 13
As bad as I feel for Tim, Nick should have shot him.
Author's Response: You never know, he might have! ;O) Thanks, Kyrie!
Date: 08/23/13 05:09 am Title: Chapter 13
Of course you end it like that. Couldn't imagine it any other way. lol. Great look into Tim's psyche here. I can see how all of that happening to him at such a young age has made him stark-raving mad. And go Nick! Even if Tim does seem to somehow have you brainwashed just a little bit...
Author's Response: I have been doing good with the no real cliffies up until now, but like I told Tracy, this will be the first of a couple more or so-ish lol Yes, now we are getting why he might be a tad on the crazy side! Thanks, Emily!
Date: 08/23/13 04:07 am Title: Chapter 13
Sure, leave us readers with a extremely mean cliffhanger. Thanks, Mare. ;)
Great chapter though. Poor Nick, I wonder how bad his injuries are and if the bullet hit anyone. Update soon, please, so I can sleep again...
Author's Response: Sorry! Just remember at the risk of you wanting to kick me, I do skip around so this will not be resolved for a few chapters yet. LOL But I know you still love me, right? :O) Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/23/13 02:12 am Title: Chapter 13
It was really interesting to see more about Tim and his family, he is bat shit looney but I love it. Loved that Nick tried to defend himself but the poor guy is really getting worse and worse. That last line worries me too. Damn your cliffies.
Author's Response: Aww yes, I am enjoying creating his back story so we all can see why he's so bonkers! Hey, I've been pretty good with the cliffies up until now, but they'll be coming more frequently from this point on. LOL Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 08/21/13 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
Tim is awful! The fact that they didn't come shows they would help protect Nick and it's hard because he doesn't see it.
Author's Response: Aww I know! I think deep down Nick does understand that but if I were being held by a rifle totting lunatic, I'd want them to save me too! lol Thanks, Kyrie!
Date: 08/21/13 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
What a great chapter!!!! Nick's emotions were raw and Tim was as creepy as ever! I hope you can update again quickly before your work starts up again! I hate when school starts lol.....
Author's Response: Thanks, Jenna! I know! :O( I wish I had the motivation to start this in June and not August! LOL I'll try to get a new chapter out either later on tonight or tomorrow!
Date: 08/21/13 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
Well look at that, Kevin was right. I'd be sad if I was Nick too, but I'm glad they listened. Tim's so creepy: "Good Boy", there's a part of me that secretly loves his creepiness. Now it's off to the cabin...been waiting for this part!
Author's Response: LOL I am getting a kick out of all the Tim love. To be so creepy that you're almost lovable is great! Yup, we are finally reaching the cabin in the next chapter! :O) Thanks, Sam!
Date: 08/21/13 03:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Yay for being able to review again!
Good chappie but oh so sad, Mare.
Like Nick stated: a game of mixed emotions..
And it's not a game I like to witness, but of course I will continue to read it, since you're an awesome writer. Please be kind to'our' boys. ;)
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Yeah I know, this story isn't exactly rainbows and unicorns huh? You know me though, I'm mean to them but in the end usually they all turn up okay-ish. lol Thanks for the review and I'm glad they're back too! I have missed them! :O)
Date: 08/21/13 01:59 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh, how I LOVED the image of little Nick hiding behind Kevin as a human shield. I think that speaks volumes about their relationship. I don't like Nick falling asleep. I'm sure his body needs rest, but I'm worrying about the prospect of him not waking up.... Well, that's morbid isn't it? On a lighter note, I really liked the AA Milne at the beginning. Really fitting.
Author's Response: The thought of a tiny Nick hiding behind Kevin made me kind of giggly too, I love their relationship (obviously lol). And as far as Nick being sleepy, it does make sense to worry about that. I was so excited when I found that poem! I thought it was a perfect fit as well! Thanks for noticing that and thanks for the review, Emily! :O)
Date: 08/21/13 01:49 am Title: Chapter 12
Nick :( not having the strength to fight or get away and feeling helpless :( :( Tim is a whacko offering him Tums and aspirin. I don't think he realizes how bad Nick is right now. I am relieved that the boys didnt go after them but I kinda wanted someone to. Great update and glad I can review normally again!
Author's Response:
aww I know! I can't imagine feeling that helpless and weak on a good day but then being kidnapped on top of everything else! I'm glad you can review normally again too! I missed this!! LOL Thanks, Tracy!! :O)
Date: 08/21/13 01:39 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad the review function is back!
Tim is a complex character isn't he, one minute he's coming across as this really caring and friendly guy and then the next minute he's a complete crazy loon!
I felt sorry for Nick when the others didn't come after him, but I'm glad they didn't either as otherwise Tim would've gunned them down in front of him. It must've been hard for them to let Nick leave with him.
Loving this story so much :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! I'm glad the reviews are back too! I have missed them!! I'm not sure how I would feel if I was in Nick's shoes. I bet I would have felt sad but relief kind of like he did. You don't want them to get killed but you also want them to try to save you! Poor guys, not an easy choice for them either!
Yeah, there's a lot of layers to Tim. I wish he was the 6th Backstreet Boy but maybe that can be the sequel! LOL
Date: 08/21/13 01:36 am Title: Chapter 12
The more you wirte about Tim, the more he becomes my favorite.
He isn't a bad guy. He just wants a family. ç_ç
I loved the small and little images that Nick thought about the guys.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Aww I know! despite how crazy he is, you just have to feel for him, right? He's got the next chapter and I think it's probably one of my most favorite ones I have ever written. :O) Glad you liked the flashbacks with Nick and the rest of the guys! Thanks, Cinzia!
Date: 08/20/13 09:25 am Title: Chapter 11
I specifically came in here to say YAY we can review again! And also that I caught up (in case you missed my now deleted post in the thread). I love Tim and his creepy completely out of reality ways. I love his POV to be honest. The way he's so attached to Nick/Howie (esp Nick) yet doesn't care at all about the others is odd and fascinating. I'm glad Kevin was able to get in the van cause that helps, and ack Howie! Don't get lost and die!
Author's Response: Thanks, Rose. Unfortunately, I missed your post! :O( But I'm really glad you are enjoying Tim's POV. He doesn't really feel like he owns the other three but Nick and Howie are his now so it's a different ballgame. Poor Howie! He needs that Siri woman talking in his head!
Date: 08/17/13 06:02 am Title: Chapter 9
What is really wrong with Nick, internal bleeding?
Oh I don't think the guys will just want to let .tim leave and take Nick. Kevin will probably try to walk on his ankle again to get to him, Brian is loose now so who knows what he will do. And then if they ever get back to the cabin Howie is gone. Oh I see disaster!
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
AJ's chapter is up next at some point today, so you'll see if you were right or not concerning their reactions when it comes to Nick. But yes, the road for the boys is not a good one! Thanks, Kim! :O)
