Date: 08/17/13 01:18 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm worried what lunatic will do when discovers Howie escaped. Nick is brushing off his pain as usual, but I get the feeling this could be more serious than what Nick thinks.
I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Great chapter as always Mare!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yup, I thikn Nick is slowly beggining to realize he might be a little worse off than he thought. Poor guy! We're getting to the cabin soon! :O)
Date: 08/16/13 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter, Mare. Somehow I just get the feeling that things won't be getting any easier though.. poor boys.. Don't you dare killing of Kevin now that he's finally back...
Author's Response:
Aww, now where in this chapter did I give off vibes that I would be killing off Kevin? LOL He just got back, I would never kill him! :O) now maybe a wolf or a bear but not ME! Thanks, Nijntje!
Date: 08/16/13 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
"Crazy people always whistle." My dad's a whistler. Lol. Sounds about right. And like I said before, now that the adrenaline is wearing off, I fear Nick's in trouble.
Author's Response:
My dad was a whistler too! LOL yes, poor Nick! Thanks, Emily! :O)
Date: 08/16/13 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh oh oh. Poor Nick. I fear what he has in mind to make the guys believe to let him go.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
That is coming up :O) Thanks, Cinzia!
Date: 08/16/13 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow. Something is really wrong and I doubt it is just the dehydration, Nick is pushing it off like he normally would. I felt scared when Tim flipped like that cause something tells me he will get worse if he finds Howie missing when they come back. Nick desperately wanting someone to recognize him made me see how dire his situation is, as it isn't something he likes to do normally. Hope he and Tim can help the others, I am looking forward to seeing what happened to Howie :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! Yeah, he's not really doing all tht well and Tim is scary which I also think Nick is beginning to get as well. We're getting to another Howie chapter soon. He might even be next but honestly, I don't remember lol
Date: 08/16/13 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
In response to your question, I do have the theme set to Mobile Phone....so idk maybe that is why AC works for me? I was as shocked as you are.
I absolutely loved Kevin in this chapter. I laughed at him with his collection of rocks, trying to use the cell as a light and holding the stick to defend himself. That kiss on Brian's head was so cute. I am glad he was able to help even though he's injured!
Author's Response:
That is so weird! LOL I'm going to try to read your new chapter by clicking from this review to see if I can do that! You're the first person who thought that the rock and stick thing was funny lol I thought it was kind of funny to when I pictured it in my head. I had to give the cousins a moment. :) Thanks, Tracy! :O)
Date: 08/16/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow. That must be so scary for Nick, I really felt his emotions here. He was terrified and has every right to be, Tim is nuts. It was interesting to see a bit of his past, I am really curious why his family ended up in that cabin in the first place and what will happen to the boys. so excited to read more :)
Author's Response:
Tracy, how the heck did you manage to send me a review? And how am I able to respond? I'm so confused because the actual site is still down according to when I click on it! Do you have magical powers of some kind? Anyway, thanks for the review! :O) Everytime we have a Tim chapter a little bit more will be revealed so you can see why is acts the way he does!
Date: 08/15/13 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Go Kevin! I'm glad he was finally able to get into the van. You did a great job describing his misery when he was sitting outside in the rain, clutching his rock and waiting for the wolves to come get him. I'm a little sad he's not wolf bait anymore, but glad he was able to help Brian and hopefully AJ too.
Author's Response:
Aww, I know you're sad he wasn't eaten, but just because he's in the van doesn't mean the wolves will go completely away, maybe lol thanks, Julie! :O)
Date: 08/15/13 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great job! I enjoy reading this fanfic , looking forward next chapters, hope they will come everyday!:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lucie! As long as I can stay ahead of myself, I'll be updating every day! You'll get another chapter later on tonight! Thanks so much for reading! I love seeing new names! :O)
Date: 08/15/13 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, finally those three are all together at last.
I really, really,loved the cousin's scene. *__*
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cinzia! I'm glad you enjoyed Brian and Kevin together. Of course since they are stuck with each other there will be more to come lol
Date: 08/15/13 04:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Go Kevin!
Author's Response: Woot! lol
Date: 08/15/13 02:14 am Title: Chapter 8
Well I looked at Jenna's review before I started writing this one, and I was totally going to tell you about how I LOL'd at "Nice of you to finally drop by." So, yeah, I loved that line, too. This had been one of my favorite chapters so far. Instead of feeling like I was watching a movie (which is about the best you can hope for when reading something like this, right?), I actually felt like I was WAS Kevin. Great job describing his situation.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Emily! I actually was afriad that line was going to be too cheesy lol I'm glad you both got a kick out of it and yay! So happy to hear you felt like you were Kevin! It's actually been one of my favorites too. This one and the one before it and a few coming up lol
Date: 08/15/13 01:48 am Title: Chapter 8
LOL loved the 'Nice of you to finally drop by' and you had Kevin kiss Brian ontop of the head before rolling off his lap.
Very well written chapter getting into Kevin's head on his pain, fears and anxieties. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! I figured Brian and Kevin deserved a cute little bonding moment. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, Thanks! :O)
Date: 08/15/13 01:43 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG I was waiting to see if Tim would be stupid & have Nick go in the store with him (and so was Nick). Tim is one sick man - definately not playing with a full deck. Does he think he can brain wash people into liking him?
Author's Response:
Aw I know, Tim is not right in the head, that's for sure. In his warped mind, he doesn't get why Nick wouldn't like him. Thanks, Carrie!
Date: 08/15/13 12:25 am Title: Chapter 6
Awe damn Howie and Kevin are gonna be attacked by wolves or something??? I am playing catch up. You're on a roll with this, I am proud and happy you're writing again, this story is so intriguing and I can't wait to see what Tim will do to Nick.
Author's Response:
There might be wolves out there wanting to attack. Perhaps! And thanks, Tracy! It really feels great to be back! :O)
