Date: 08/10/13 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh man. I have a feeling that once all the adrenaline wears off, Nick's going to be in a lot of trouble.....
Author's Response:
Could very well be. Maybe he can just sexy dance his way out of this! LOL thanks, Emily!
Date: 08/10/13 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh this guy is CREEPY. I think once again in Nick fashion he is more hurt than he says and it is really nice to see him trying to help the others. I love Howie being so protective but Tim....well hes 50 shades of LOCO. I hope they can help Brian, Kevin and AJ too. great so far, keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO fifty shades of loco! I love that! I might have to use that for a future chapter title! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 08/10/13 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was SO SO good! great description of their injuries and their statuses. I love the way you manage to show their relationships with each other so subtly, but so strongly at the same time-- Like the scene with Nick telling Kevin it's not his fault. I got a little choked up. I wish I could do that half as well as you do!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for saying that, Emily! I appreciate it. I added that scene with Nick and Kevin in at the very last minute so I'm glad it had the desired affect! :O)
Date: 08/10/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bananas!! Only you would come up with that lol. Another great chapter can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
LMAO I know, right? I'm still not sure where that came from. Thanks again! I'll be updating later on today :O)
Date: 08/10/13 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I found myself holding my breath as Hwie was trying to free himself lol
Author's Response:
Yay! That's always great to hear!
Date: 08/10/13 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY Mare!! Glad to see you're writing a new story! I love your writing style & the suspense fics! Great chapter & I was thinking it was Kevin that was the "tall one" lol
Author's Response:
Well, Kevin is tall! LOL Thanks, Carrie! :O) It's nice to see you back and writing again as well!
Date: 08/10/13 09:11 am Title: Chapter 3
YAAAAAY! Mare's Back! Are you happy to be back? 'Cause I'm happy you're back.lol Totally stoked about this story too. At first I thought it was Nick and Howie with Tim, because the way you wrote the "tall one's" reactions in the car, he sounded more like Nick. Then since Kevin got up and out of the car I thought he was going to be prisoner and Nick would be broken, but excited at how you're playing this all out. Tim is an unpredictable character and it will be interesting to see what happens with him and Nick.
Bottom line, I'm happy you're back, sorry it took so long to write a review, but I finally got a chance to sit down and type one out! Can't wait for more...
Author's Response:
I am very happy to be back and re-energized. I just hope I can keep it up. I am writing ahead of myself. I just finished chapter 8 so at least we know we have that many done. I had actually gone back and forth myself as to whether it should be Kevin or Nick. If Nick was left at the car, it would have been he and Brian stuck inside and AJ broken. In the end, I just couldn't resist having Nick be the kidnapped one. Old habits die hard I guess. LOL!
I'm so happy to see you back and reading! YAY!! :O) I'll probably be posting chapter 4 some point today!
Date: 08/10/13 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Ah so it was Nick who was with Howie. I am glad none of them are hurt too badly but wow, must be scary to be in that situation. Great update Mare!
Author's Response:
Yup! Nick and Howie together. As far as people being hurt, it's still kind of early, you never know! ;O) Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 08/10/13 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Loving the new chapter! Glad Kevin and Nick made up before separating! And glad there will be some Kevin/nick bromance moments in this story. I went to see the concert last night and got video of Nick kissing Kevin and Kevin sipping it off bc he got him on the neck.
Author's Response:
Aww! I hope you upload that. I'd love to see it! Glad you got to see that concert. Julilly was at that show as well! :O) Yup I'm actually writing a Nick and Kevin scene now! that will be showing up a few chapters down the road. :O) Thanks, Kim!
Date: 08/09/13 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
I was wrong then, it was Nick who went with Howie! I love how you keep us guessing :)
Aw poor Kevin though, he must be in agony and also feeling useless right now.
I can't wait for more, loving this Mare :)
Author's Response:
LOL yup, and thanks! I figured that would be part of the fun! I know, poor Kevin :O(
Date: 08/09/13 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay, Howie managed to free himself, but I'm sure he won't get very far! I'm thinking that Kevin must be the one who was with him, I just hope Nick and Brian are OK in the van.
Author's Response:
Aww yes, Howie was pretty handy! As for the rest, you'll have to see! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 08/09/13 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amazing chapter!
Let's see if I get them right: the two trapped are, obviously, Aj and Brian (not being able to move, that's a real torture for him LOL); Nick is now the prisoner since he's the one with Tim while Howie is the lost one. That leaves Kevin for the broken one. I'm not sure, though. You still can pull some twist. lol
Author's Response:
Yup, you're correct! Thanks, Cinzia!
Date: 08/09/13 07:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey Mare, I'm so glad u are writing again! I was hoping that Kevin's return would spark some inspiration. U write the best bromance, especially between Kevin/Nick (my fav pair)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kim! Yup, that boy did it for me! I have missed those two together! Obviously they are my favorite pair too! There shall be some Kevin/Nick love in this one! Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 08/09/13 07:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh... I love it! I love how Howie described what happened while trying to free himself.
And, of course, I loved Brian's joke about his boyband boyfriend! LOL
Amazing job!!!
Author's Response:
I knew you would enjoy that one, Cinzia! I admit that line was written just for you! *whispers* don't tell Emily! LOL
Date: 08/09/13 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL at Brian's boyband boyfriend! I'm back with my inappropriate responses to serious chapters. Enjoy! And, seriously, ditto to what Tracy and Julie already said.
Author's Response:
Hey, that's why I throw those lines in! To give you something to comment on. LMAO Thanks, Emily!
