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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 03:57 am Title: Chapter 2

Another fantastic chapter! This story is so well-written; I'm loving all the description! I like how you flashed back to the accident and what lead up to it (bananas LOL), but stopped before you revealed too much about who is who. Now I'm thinking Kevin is the one with Tim, not Nick, and that Nick and Brian are the ones who are trapped. It's kind of fun to not know for sure yet. I'm glad Howie got himself free; I hope he doesn't run into Tim in the woods, but I'm guessing he will. Looking forward to more soon!

Author's Response:

I don't know why I picked bananas! It's the first thought that came into my head. LMAO I'm also glad you're enjoying the whole guessing game. I figured that would be part of the fun, trying to figure out who was where although by the end of the next chapter you'll know for sure because there comes a time when being too vague doesn't work anymore. Thanks for the compliments especially about the decription since that's what I always feel like needs the most work. :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 02:33 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooh like that you revealed the story a bit more and how heroic Howie was in this chapter. Hope he finds them and doesn't get caught. Great chapter :)

Author's Response:

Howie the hero. It's about time! He needs to be in the spotlight every once in awhile although he's not really trying to find the guys, more like trying to find help in general. Thanks, Tracy! :O)

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

After reading Julie's review, I have to throw it out there that at first I thought it was Tim Richardson, too! It fit, until he was all kidnapping Backstreet Boys and stuff.

Author's Response:

LMAO yeah, maybe I should mention that as a disclaimer in my next chapter. Sorry, Tim! I forgot you existed! Well not really but I forgot your name was the same as my little creepy, lunatics!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, this is definitely an intriguing start! I'm really interested to know what the deal with this Tim character is, exactly, and I spent a long time trying to figure out who "the little one" was. I actually assumed maybe we were going old school and it was Nick! Howie's a very good choice for captive, though. Excited to read more!

Author's Response:

Well that was very insightful of you because I did never mention when this was taking place exactly. LOL you could have very well been right! I mean if we were talking 94 or 95 then pretty much everyone would tower over Nick and he would clearly be the smaller one. good thinking Sherlock! This almost did take place back then! and who knows it might still be in the past. Just another mystery. Thanks for reading! :O) I do like the idea of Howie being held captive. Poor guy needs some kind of attention! hehe

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1

So huzzah for the official return of Mare! I told you this already but this is an amazing start. I was shocked you didn't start with the Boys but I think that's what made this story even better. It's creepy, addictive and interesting all wrapped up into one and I can't wait to see where this goes!

...So...should I walk out of your reviews naked? LOL.

Author's Response:

Whoa, I was just checking mail when your review popped up! Yay! I'm so relieved to see that everyone likes that I didn't start with the boys right off the bat. You know that's what I was most worried about. And woohoo to creppy Tim. As far as you walking around my review naked, I'll leave that up to you! LOL Thanks, Rose!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow.

Wow.

I love, really love, that you've started the story from Tim's pov. It's creepy, scary and interesting.
I can't wait to see what's the destiny for the other three, given that Nick was the one together with Howie.

Wow.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Cinzia! I am loving all this creepy talk! LOL I'm glad you liked the start, like I told Julie I was worried about starting off with Tim.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Uh oh this tim guy kidnapped them? He doesn't sound like he wants to help anybody, he's a creeper. Loving this so far, Mare and welcome back!!! I am really happy to see you post something new agsin :)

Author's Response:

Yup, well two of them at least. Thanks, Tracy! I think getting all your feedback for the older stuff this summer helped get me going as well! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG Mare, this is amazing!! I really hoped the new CD would inspire you to write more, and I'm so glad it did.

Poor boys, I hope they get away, but I'm sure that's not going to happen for a while! 

I haven't forgot about Scars either, will get back to that now that I've finished studying :)



Author's Response:

Yes, thanks to Kevin and the CD I feel newly BSB reborn! LOL I just hope it lasts! I'm going to take full advantage of it for now though! Hope your second test went well!! :O)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG, Mare, I love this so far!!! What a delightfully disturbing start! At first I thought you meant Tim as in Kevin's brother LOL, but quickly I realized that was not the case! (At least, I don't THINK it is LOL.) I love how you started with a chapter centered on him, instead of one of the Boys - usually I don't like that, but in this case, it worked out perfectly. You did a great job revealing the details slowly until we had a clear picture of just what kind of person Tim is. This was honestly very creepy, and I mean that as a huge compliment! I can't wait to read more and find out who is who. Now that we know the shorter one is Howie, I'm picturing the bigger one as Nick, just cause I like them paired together, but it could be Kevin, and I'm wondering which two are trapped and who is broken by the side of the road. I'm so excited to find out!

Author's Response:

First of all, CRAP! I totally forgot that Kevin's brother's name was Tim! LMAO I borrowed Tim from FNL because I knew I'd remember his name that way and we all know how bad I am with remembering names! Although think of what a warped twist that would be if I did make it Tim Richardson, I mean they are in the woods somewhere! I was honestly worried about starting it the way I did. I was and still am kind of afriad, people won't want to continue reading or half read and think it's about this random guy before they get to the other two, but it had to start with Tim. I don't think it would have worked any other way because of the way I wanted to slowly reveal who was who! Thanks so much, Julie especially for saying it waa creepy that's exactly the word I was hoping to hear from people when it came to him! I'm glad to know you really enjoyed it! YAY! :O)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1

MARE!! omg I was wondering if I'd see you posting! :D  I am curious to see where you are going with this story!! :D

Post more soon!



Author's Response:

LOL yup I'm back! You can thank Kevin! :O) Thanks! I will update soon!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Can't wait to see where this is going to go!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :O)