Date: 09/01/13 09:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG!I held my breath for almost this entire chapter!Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!
Date: 08/30/13 04:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I can't wait until you update this story is getting so good
Date: 08/29/13 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
ahh....don't die Nick!
Date: 08/29/13 11:05 pm Title: Chapter One
Wow....please update :) this story is soooo good i have been to busy reading ur story kn my spare time then perfecting my own lol. I think nick will suprise everyone of i hope
Date: 08/29/13 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Wow this was intense!! Ugh Nick better make it!! Lol
Date: 08/29/13 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Come on Nick!
Date: 08/29/13 12:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
OMFG!I hope Nick is going to make it to his "Paused" self and gets back into his body before it's too late!This is so crazy!I can't believe you left it at this point!This chapter was so good but scary!Can't wait for more!
Date: 08/29/13 11:27 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Hmm, I'm curious to see what consequences this will have..
Date: 08/28/13 11:57 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
FINALLY! Caught up! And left with a cliff hanger! Ughhh! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 08/27/13 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
ooeh I'm curious!
Date: 08/27/13 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
ahhh cliffhanger! Update soon!
Date: 08/27/13 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Woke up at 3:30 in the morning and read this...I really hope that Nick decided to go back to the hospital and not off to just some random place,And I also hope he is smart enough to search for himself on the same computer they found Margo on.I hope that that is not too much to ask lol.I am a little worried about this plan that Margo has.Hopefully it's nothing too crazy that hurts Nick somehow.This was a great chapter!Can't wait for more!
Date: 08/27/13 08:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
great depiction of Jane lol can't wait for more!
Date: 08/27/13 08:07 am Title: Chapter One
can't wait for more! good job Paul :)
