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Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 04:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow, I am so happy that Margo got "unpaused"! But poor Nick for going to the wrong place. I hope Brian will get the paperwork done in time... great chapter!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/13 04:15 am Title: Chapter Eight

Lol @ the comment about Nick always being late. Other than that, Jane sucks.

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Four

This keeps getting better and better!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Three

Wow, this is a very interesting story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ugh!I hate Jane!I hope Brian gets what he needs to buy Nick some more time!I also hope that IF/when Nick wakes up he remembers Margo cause if he doesn't that would be so sad!I know I keep saying this but I love this story so much!It is great!Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 10:22 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

You can't seriously end like that!! We need another update!!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 02:44 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

He needs to go find himself before it's too late!OMFG!This is so crazy!Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 02:18 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

oooooh...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/13 12:24 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

MARGO?!?!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Margo!! (?) I loved the image of Brian and Nick sharing earbuds. It's very "them," I think.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Wow...that was one of the best chapters, ever? Got tears in my ears...

But I got to ask, have you looked up all that info, you just knew or...what? Cuz it sounds really realistic ;)

Author's Response: Researched it! Consequently, I also found this really neat article from earlier this month in which doctors were able to communicate with a patient in a deep coma asking yes or no questions and mapping MRI scans. 5 out of 13 patients they tested were able to correctly answer yes-or-no questions this way, by concentrating on the "yes" statement following the doctors asking them - like consistently. It was really interesting, you should check that out if you're interested in this stuff. It'd be amazing if they were able to find a way to communicate with comatose patients.

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Was it Margo?!I know you're not gonna tell me but I bet it was!Ahhh!I can't wait for more!Great Chapter!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

O.M.G!!!!!!!!!! Margo is in the same ward!!!! Unless you are tricking us..then I'ma just have to SLAP you! So finding yourself really DOES work!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 07:50 pm Title: Chapter One

woot! Loophole ftw! Update soon!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Legal loophole for the win!