Date: 11/14/13 02:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
I'm not sure if I liked the whole Lauren coming to the hospital thing. I get that she's trying to be supportive, but I don't think that it was her place to come and visit Matty. If I was Abbey, I probably would have handled that situation poorly. I was impressed that she didn't freak out. :) Also, the cliffy is KILLING me!! Update!!
Author's Response: lol... Well, she freaked out a little. On the inside. haha
Date: 11/14/13 04:34 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Uhoh, what does he mean, they changed?
I guess you're also a writer who knows how torture her readers with mean cliffies!
Author's Response: Yeah... It's kind of my thing. lol
Date: 11/14/13 04:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
OHHHHHH That last line! I have this crazy theory! Great chapter I can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Crazy theories are always good! Love when the chapter incites crazy theories!!
Date: 11/14/13 02:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Why you gotta play me like that, homie? Cliffhanger? Psht.
Author's Response: You know you read just for the cliffhangers, dawg. Psht.
Date: 11/14/13 01:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
"To this day, it still blows my mind that I said those words less than a month before everything everything changed for us."
I feel like I would appreciate this line a lot more if there was a nice little "next" link on the right hand side :)
(But also I love it and I love this and update soon
Author's Response: Maybe soon the "next" button will appear.. :) I'm glad you loved the chapter and I hope the next one is as well loved as the ones before it, lol.
Date: 11/14/13 01:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Lauren seems a little too perfect! It was nice of her to come and play with Matty. Great chapter and I want to know what everything is! LOL
Author's Response: I really, REALLY wanted to play Battleship after writing that chapter!
