Date: 11/17/13 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen / 2013
Lauren better not die and give her heart to Matty! Ugh women you and these twist!! Haha
Author's Response: So many different guesses about what the last time line could mean! I love it. You know I love to twist these storylines and discombobulate everyone! ;) Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 11/17/13 10:56 am Title: Chapter Sixteen / 2013
Nicks going to die and give Matty his kinda-wonky-but-overall-function heart isn't he?! Lol
Author's Response: LOL You so silly. You know I'm not going to answer your reviews with plot line infos! ....and also that I'd never have a big reveal that someone's gonna be able to guess before it comes! ;)
Date: 11/17/13 08:58 am Title: Chapter Sixteen / 2013
Thankfully Matthew didn't hear any of that! I'm so curious what will happen that will cause problems between Nick and Lauren
Author's Response: It's coming! ;)
Date: 11/17/13 07:30 am Title: Chapter Sixteen / 2013
Aww don't be mean to Phil!! Also I totally think I'm right about my crazy theroy! Lol!
Author's Response: lol I think Phil liked it (hence the twinkling in his eyes after she called him "old man" haha)... Hmm, I'd love to know the crazy theory you've got!
Date: 11/17/13 05:34 am Title: Chapter Fifteen / 2013
I just read the story and its amazing, sad but amazing. Cant wait for more. Hopefully little Matty will have his christmas miracle.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Keep the tissues at the ready! ;)
Date: 11/17/13 03:57 am Title: Chapter Fifteen / 2013
I love Nick for doing that for Matty! I hope that Abbey doesn't have to know what life without Matty would be like.
Author's Response: I hope not either! I guess we'll find out soon. I really loved outlining this chapter. It was based off something my family really did once and I thought it would be really fun to infuse that happy moment into the story. Stuff like that can really create the best memories.
Date: 11/16/13 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen / 2013
Aww that was sweet of them to bring thanksgiving dinner to them
Author's Response: We did this with my mom the year she was sick in the hospital. It really raises spirits when you do stuff like this. I thought it would be fun to bring that scene into this story. :)
Date: 11/16/13 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen / 2013
Just finished the latest two chapters. Amazing as always! I loved the fact that Nick brought Matty his first turkey and I was enthralled by Brian and Nick's phone call. I think it's great how you have created a whole secondary story line with the two of them. Also, I totally think that Brian is gonna show up at the hospital with a miracle weilding doctor in tow. :)
Author's Response: Secondary storylines are one of my favorite writing devices. All my stories always have at least one or two underlying storylines that go on in the background or alternate for foreground. I rarely write a story that's straight up just the face value of the story... Sometimes without anyone really even noticing it until I wrap everything together. My Frick & Frack stuff always seems to crawl its way in. Those two and their relationship has always fascinated me, so it tends to sneak in even when I don't particularly plan for it to.
Date: 11/16/13 09:20 am Title: Chapter Fifteen / 2013
I laughed at the last line, so funny. It's great they decided to have dinner at the hospital!
Author's Response: LOL The last line actually came from a version of this chapter I wrote where Nick DID drop the turkey. When I rewrote the chapter with Nick NOT dropping the turkey, I just felt like his character was like oh thank God that part got rewritten! Haha... So I had to put him in there saying he was glad he didn't drop the turkey! Just a little glimpse behind the scenes so to speak. LOL
Date: 11/16/13 04:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen / 2013
I agree with Matty! I hope the reason Brian broke off the call so fast was to start working on an action plan for Matty.
Author's Response: I guess there's only one way to find out.......
Date: 11/16/13 04:27 am Title: Chapter Thirteen / 2013
This chapter made me cry especially the end. Well written!
Author's Response: *sniffle* Brave lil Matty...
Date: 11/16/13 04:10 am Title: Chapter Twelve / 2013
I agree with Kevin, Nick should call Brian. I feel so bad for Abbey....
Date: 11/15/13 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen / 2013
Brian and Nick's conversation was intense and wonderfully written. I loved how nick accidentally let it slip that the child he was talking about was his son and doubly loved Brian basically hanging up on him. Also the bit at the end with Matty saying it'd be cool if Nick was their family. GAH.
Author's Response: lol You loved Brian hanging up on Nick? lol Twisty. I love YOU Steph! <3 ....I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. I look forward to your raving reviews. They make me LOL and grin all cheesy like this :D
Date: 11/15/13 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen / 2013
aww Nick, I think Brian just needs time to think, and I really want Abbey to tell matty that Nick is his father, they both need each other!
Author's Response: Ahhh... time, time, time... everyone needs time!!! .... Thanks for reviewing :) I agree I think Matty needs to know. But damn that stubborn streak in Abbey.
Date: 11/15/13 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen / 2013
I can't believe Brian hung up on Nick!
Author's Response: Crazy what hurt can drive a person to do, huh?
