Date: 11/15/13 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen / 2013
Oh my god! I'm glad I stocked up on Kleenex with Nick and Dogface because I'm gonna need it now! Oliver this story too! ;)
Author's Response: Kleenex really are a good investment :)
Date: 11/15/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter Twelve / 2013
Great chapter!! I loved the explanation of Brian and Nick's falling out. I also don't think that I've commented on your writing yet ... it's amazing, BTW. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. One of these days, I'm gonna write a full story just about the fall out between Nick & Brian that I imagine in my head. Seems my best stories are Frick & Frack related (like Something Beautiful and Borrowed Time). It'd be an interesting part of the BSB history to explore. We'll see if I ever get there with it. :) Thanks again for the review!
Date: 11/15/13 11:37 am Title: Chapter Thirteen / 2013
Gah! So many sads!
Author's Response: Did you get the Kleenex stock yet?
Date: 11/15/13 09:44 am Title: Chapter Thirteen / 2013
Ugh, the kid's too grown up for his age, but I guess that happens when you can't act your age because you'rein the hospital all the time. :(
Author's Response: Yeah, kids talk older in hospital settings I've noticed. Kids that are constantly surrounded by adults talk like adults more than many of the adults I know do.
Date: 11/15/13 09:38 am Title: Chapter Twelve / 2013
Sad chapter, but very well written, as always.
Date: 11/15/13 04:50 am Title: Chapter Twelve / 2013
I'd love to leave you a review and tell you I loved this chapter especially Nick and Brian's fallout, but it seems my screen has gotten all blurry. Someone Ninja must have snuck in here and left onions lying around..... YEA... That's my story and I'm stickin to it!
Author's Response: Aw man, damn those onion wielding ninjas! They're very evil, sneaking in and making everything go blurry! .... ;)
Date: 11/14/13 02:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
I'm not sure if I liked the whole Lauren coming to the hospital thing. I get that she's trying to be supportive, but I don't think that it was her place to come and visit Matty. If I was Abbey, I probably would have handled that situation poorly. I was impressed that she didn't freak out. :) Also, the cliffy is KILLING me!! Update!!
Author's Response: lol... Well, she freaked out a little. On the inside. haha
Date: 11/14/13 04:34 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Uhoh, what does he mean, they changed?
I guess you're also a writer who knows how torture her readers with mean cliffies!
Author's Response: Yeah... It's kind of my thing. lol
Date: 11/14/13 04:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
OHHHHHH That last line! I have this crazy theory! Great chapter I can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Crazy theories are always good! Love when the chapter incites crazy theories!!
Date: 11/14/13 02:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Why you gotta play me like that, homie? Cliffhanger? Psht.
Author's Response: You know you read just for the cliffhangers, dawg. Psht.
Date: 11/14/13 01:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
"To this day, it still blows my mind that I said those words less than a month before everything everything changed for us."
I feel like I would appreciate this line a lot more if there was a nice little "next" link on the right hand side :)
(But also I love it and I love this and update soon
Author's Response: Maybe soon the "next" button will appear.. :) I'm glad you loved the chapter and I hope the next one is as well loved as the ones before it, lol.
Date: 11/14/13 01:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven / 2013
Lauren seems a little too perfect! It was nice of her to come and play with Matty. Great chapter and I want to know what everything is! LOL
Author's Response: I really, REALLY wanted to play Battleship after writing that chapter!
Date: 11/13/13 01:02 am Title: Chapter Ten / 2013
It's good that Lauren will stand by Nick but I wish Abbey had someone too. I can't imagine how hard it is for her.
Author's Response: We'll see what happens over the next few chapters...
Date: 11/13/13 12:58 am Title: Chapter Nine / 2013
I'm glad Nick went to the hospital and I agree with Abbey that Matty shouldn't know about Nick until they're sure he'll stick around. I gotta say, I love Phil! LOL
Author's Response: Abbey's got her head screwed on right at least! We'll see if Nick needs the out or not. And PHIL LOVES YOU BACK haha
Date: 11/12/13 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Ten / 2013
Legitimately in love with this story! I love Nick in this, he's so different than usual and yet still so Nickish. I love how he was upfront with Lauren about everything right away instead of trying to keep it all a big secret. But of course being predictable isn't your style ;) oh I also loved Phil - ha! So funny. Love the constant updates and on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one!
Author's Response: haha You know I never write anything that you can predict the ending to. And once again, NONE of you are gonna see this ending before it arrives. I'm having a lot of fun exploring a more mature Nick in this. I imagine Nick would be confused about maturity even as he grows into it and starts acting mature. He's got a lot to learn but he's fumbling along okay. I like trying out different facets of Nick story to story while retaining some essence of him. Always fun exploring the character. ;) Thanks for the review!
