Date: 01/13/14 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I just read all the chapters tonight, and you definitely have my attention.... Great story! I'm always a sucker for well-written Brian stories(there are way too few of those)and this one truly is. I am sad to see Brian going through a hard time with his divorce, and just the thought of him losing Baylee makes me want to cry. The chapter where AJ confronts Brian on his drinking actually DID bring me to tears . . .very powerful. I was not happy when you had Kayla seemingly interested in Nick. It didn't match up with what I had perceived as little sparks of feelings between her and Brian lol I am NOW happy, though, reading chapter 19 and how Kayla felt when Brian hugged her. She was feeling ALL the feelings! Not sure what is going to happen in Montreal, but guessing that maybe the father of Kayla's baby might possibly live there? Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I've always been a Brian girl and I fully agree that there are not enough stories out there about him. I really appreciate the fact that you think the story is well-written. It means so much to me when people say things like that!! Thanks again. :)
Date: 01/13/14 05:43 am Title: Chapter 19
You either have kids or have spent a lot of time with them. The interaction of the toddlers was dead on! Loved every second!
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I don't have children of my own (yet), but a lot of my friends are starting to have kids. I based the interaction between the toddlers on my cousins' kids.
Date: 01/13/14 01:41 am Title: Chapter 19
Just caught up on the last few chapters and loved them.
Can't wait to see where the story goes.
If they think November in Kentucky is cold, they will be in shock for December in Montreal, haha!
Author's Response: I know!! They're going to die in Montreal .... -20+C ... Ahhhhhh!
Date: 01/13/14 12:50 am Title: Chapter 19
This story has me giggling. So darn good. Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Glad that I could make you laugh a little bit. That was my intention. :)
Date: 01/13/14 12:40 am Title: Chapter 18
Frick and Frack! I love those guys! Loving this story! :)
Author's Response: I know, right?? :) Thanks for the feedback (as always)!
Date: 01/13/14 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17
I can just imagine the crowd looking at AJ. This chapter was awesome! :)
Author's Response: I know!! The crowd's reaction was priceless!! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Date: 01/12/14 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 19
Uhhhohhhhh...seems someone is developing feeling for Brian now! But I can't help feeling that if Nick was allowed to show his feelings, allowed to touch her, things might be different. In just the last chapter she was questioning him (in her mind) about how disconnected he seems. That could make a huge difference. I can see a tiff between the two guys coming up..lol Great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story!
And I also see you just joined TDS (The DarkSide). Welcome!! I'm one of the mods there and it was great seeing you sign up! Enjoy!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and for the welcome to TDS! I agree with you one hundred percent that things may have worked out differently if Brian hadn't imposed that "no touching" stipulation on Nick. It's worthwhile to wonder if Brian had some ulterior motives when he told Nick to keep his hands off. ;)
Date: 01/12/14 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
No, I think Brian was right! LOL Great job!
Author's Response: I agree. Brian had the right idea. :)
Date: 01/12/14 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oooooooohhhhhhhhhh can't wait for more
Author's Response: Hahaha! Things are about to get interesting!!
Date: 01/11/14 12:47 am Title: Chapter 18
Poor Nick, he's just going to have to hold out! Love it when AJ said his daughter wasn't going to date till she was an adult!
Author's Response: I can totally see AJ being an overprotective daddy ... like chasing guys away with baseball bats. LOL
Date: 01/10/14 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
Love that Baylee has a girlfriend! Awesome chapter, as always
Author's Response: Thanks! All of the sixth graders that I know are "dating" each other, so I figured that Baylee deserved a "girlfriend" too. :)
Date: 01/10/14 05:15 am Title: Chapter 18
I wonder if Baylee is that much of a jerk of a kid in real life. Great story, poory nicky.
Author's Response: I highly doubt it!! I always imagined Baylee's personality to be like Brian's; sweet, goofy, polite. I'm actually basing Baylee's character (and his tween angst) after a boy that I know.
Date: 01/10/14 05:10 am Title: Chapter 17
I so loved AJ for this chapter thank you thank you!
Author's Response: Hahaha! It seems as though most people loved AJ for what he did in this chapter. :)
Date: 01/10/14 04:22 am Title: Chapter 18
Love this story
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: 01/09/14 01:37 am Title: Chapter 17
Great new chapter! Nice to see that Kayla will be heading to Montreal (I love my Montreal).
Oh if I was Baylee, I would have been mortified at what AJ did, hahaha!
Author's Response: Haha! I'm pretty sure that Kayla is less than thrilled to be heading to Montreal, but I'm glad that you're happy!! Poor Baylee!! I guess that's what happens when AJ is your "uncle".
