Date: 07/01/14 04:40 am Title: Chapter 13
It doesn't seem like Kayla and Nick have much chemistry but it's clear that Brian might be interested.
Author's Response: Yeah, the whole Kayla/Nick thing is falling flat at this point. Brian, on the other hand ...
Date: 07/01/14 04:38 am Title: Chapter 12
The dogs' names are hilarious!
Author's Response: HA! My old neighbours were a gay couple and they had two little dogs with those names! They were the most amazing couple, so I wrote them into the story.
Date: 07/01/14 04:38 am Title: Chapter 11
The ladies, even Brian's mother, just can't seem to resist that Carter charm I guess. Poor Brian!
Author's Response: According to most of the fandom, the Carter charm IS pretty hard to resist. Although, I have never been a "Nick girl" so I don't really get it. :D
Date: 07/01/14 04:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Now she's just getting to be more curious... I wonder what's going on there (other than Nick likely failing at his promises :P)
Author's Response: It doesn't look like Nick is going to be able to hold out for very long. He shouldn't have made the promises in the first place.
Date: 07/01/14 04:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Do you spend a lot of time around pre-teens? Because I feel like you've got that attitude pegged! lol
Author's Response: LOL - My first teaching assignment was in a grade 6 class so I became pretty well-versed in the ways of eleven year olds. You would not believe the way some of those kids behaved! *massive eye roll*
Date: 07/01/14 04:34 am Title: Chapter 8
I don't think Nick can be trusted to keep those kind of promises!
Author's Response: Nick can rarely be trusted to keep any kind of promise ... let alone one of this nature. :P
Date: 07/01/14 04:34 am Title: Chapter 7
Hmm. Kayla seems to be going above and beyond for someone she doesn't really know... curious.
Author's Response: Yeah ... it is a bit weird. I know that you've already figured out that she has an ulterior motive.
Date: 07/01/14 04:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Phew, that Peggy is pretty intense! Too bad Brian's trickery failed.
Author's Response: Peggy needs to relax. I think she's been doing her job for too long. Did you really think that Brian's trickery would work? :P
Date: 07/01/14 04:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Baylee is such a little brat sometimes. He needs a kick in the shin LOL Hopefully they buy Brian's story about the school!
Author's Response: Ha! Baylee isn't usually portrayed as a brat, but I figured that being a pre-teen he's bound to have some angst built up.
Date: 06/07/14 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww, lucky Brian has such great friends to help him out in his time of need!
Author's Response: You knew that the other guys would be around to help him out! They couldn't let him suffer on his own ...
Date: 06/07/14 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I had to come back and review this chapter because I was so hasty in clicking next! This smells like trouble. I can only imagine what schemes Leighanne has come up with to try and make Brian look bad.
Still enjoying this thus far. The writing is really strong and I love the style.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments about the writing. It really means a lot to me that you're enjoying my style. :D The smell of trouble is definitely strong ...
Date: 06/07/14 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh the petulant pre-teen years! Poor Baylee...or should I say poor Brian! I wonder what CPS could want.
Author's Response: I'm gonna go with "poor Brian". Baylee's attitude will stick around for the whole story and he gives his dad a run for his money.
Date: 06/07/14 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beginning my reading for the forum challenge! Right off the bat I love the way they banter. I'm a sucker for realism when it comes to dialogue and the way they speak just seems so natural.
Based on the summary, I'm curious to know what's to come.
Author's Response: Excited to see that you've started the challenge. I hope that you enjoy the story. There are parts of it that I'm proud of and parts of it that I'm not so thrilled with. It will be nice to see what you think. :)
Date: 06/03/14 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
LMAO AJ is epic
Author's Response: LOL - I had to go back and look at the chapter before I could respond to this. OMG, I would have been MORTIFIED if anyone had done that to me in the sixth grade! I agree, AJ is amazing for what he did to Baylee. Bahahahah!
Date: 03/03/14 01:47 am Title: Chapter 40
oh wow i didn't think that was the last chapter but great job. A sequel would be great, to see Baylee as a big brother to a little girl, to see what happens to nick if he falls in love and btw you STILL did NOT make it up to me for what you did (sniffs) but over all great story.
Author's Response: I was considering all of those plot lines for the sequel! I'll have to see how things play out. Perhaps I will make up for what I did to you in the sequel. :D Anyways, thanks so much for all of your feedback the whole way through. It really means a lot to me!! :)
