Date: 02/26/14 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this so far Julie, I hope Holden will be OK though, poor baby :(
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! I know, poor Holden... that part was hard to write! :(
Date: 02/26/14 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I need to see how Nick (or Howie but I'm betting on Nick) dies LOL. I like the start of this ZDR :)
Author's Response: Thanks ZDR! :)
Date: 02/26/14 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
It's written in such a realistic way that it wouldn't surprise me if this had happened for real. Although the genre is slash, it reads like a drama and or a love story because of Howie's inner battle and possibly Nick's as well. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I knew the only way I could write a slash was if I could find a way to make it seem believable, so I'm glad I accomplished that! This one will definitely be more drama than slash, but maybe a bit of a love story as well, in a way. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thanks again for the review!
Date: 02/26/14 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh this is getting intense, and quickly. Poor Howie, and of course poor Holden and Leigh. I love the little nods you have in here to the awkwardness between him and Nick, how Nick would go out once he found out Howie wasn't going, and how Howie was grateful for his concern. Looking forward to more! Also - I had assumed the first bit was Nick narrating with Howie having committed (attempted?) suicide, but now I realise that it's ambiguous and I'm more leaning towards it being Nick because it's easier for me to see Nick doing something like that. Anyway.. speculation! Loving this! :o)
Author's Response: Thanks!! I had fun with the awkwardness between Nick and Howie. I love what you said about the prologue being ambiguous. I originally wrote it with names, then took the names out that way in hopes you wouldn't be able to tell who was narrating for sure, so I'm glad I changed it. I like it better that way. Thanks again, and glad you're enjoying it so far!
