Date: 05/03/17 09:06 am Title: Chapter 59
Well damn that shower scene made me kind of need a shower lol. :p anyways. I was totally right. Nick is afraid of hurting Howie. So he's playing around and trying to figure things out but he's scared. I laughed when he asked what it was like to fuck a dude. That part was funny. But I kind of saw that coming...moving onto the next chapter.
Author's Response: LOL Glad you enjoyed! This chapter definitely took me out of my comfort zone, but I enjoyed writing it.
Date: 02/20/17 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 59
"OMG" is now a punctuation mark at this point.
I've read many slash fics before, but this still left me jaw-dropped, probably because of Nick's unforeseen bisexuality and unpredictability. Lol at Nick thinking he'd rip Howie apart.
Based on the end notes, it seems like Howie might be pushing his luck. Quit playing games with Howie's heart, Nick.
Before I clicked the link, I knew it would take me to the video of Howie talking about Nick's pubic hair progression. In terms of slash, Howie & Nick can sometimes be a head-scratching pair, but it's comical moments like that that make me root for their fictional relationship. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's great to read thoughts from someone who is a slash fan. I think Nick has been suppressing some feelings for a long time that he's finally allowing to come out, and that makes him unpredictable.
Date: 02/20/17 04:07 am Title: Chapter 59
Okay!
1. I will never be able to listen to that 1D song without thinking of this story ever again.
2. I'm glad that you're not going to get anymore "graphic" than you did in this chapter. I'm not going to lie; I definitely found myself cringing at a few points. Don't misunderstand - I wasn't cringing at the wording or the writing (both were tasteful and excellently done), I was working through my "I can't believe I'm reading this type of thing" mindset. Haha! This is what happens when the writing is so good; I look past subject matter that would usually turn me off.
3. What is going to happen?! Ugh! My gut tells me that Howie is gonna get hurt. Nick is gonna get freaked out as his feelings get stronger and he's doing to take off. If his feelings for Howie become public knowledge (re: to the group or if Lauren finds out), Nick is gonna revert back to his old ways and stomp all over poor Howie's heart.
4. Hurry and post the next chapter!! I'm not afraid to read it. Well, maybe a little worried, but not totally afraid. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I was cringing at a few points writing this chapter. I will post the next chapter sometime today!
Date: 02/19/17 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 59
That chapter was great, and I really wanted them to end up in bed together! And I'm not even into slash lol, but this story is so believable and their relationship so genuine and I do love a good love story.
Author's Response: Ah, that's awesome!! I love hearing that. I was afraid this would be the chapter that scared away some of the non-slash people. I don't know that I'll ever write another slash, but now that I'm so invested in this one, I'm enjoying writing it. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
