Date: 03/31/14 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Oh and btw I just had a gut feeling it wasnt Nick who died but I was still pleasantly surprised to fint out I was right. Your writing is thát good ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad that your gut turned out to be right. I couldn't actually kill Nick ...
Date: 03/31/14 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Another one who went NICK when I saw your chapter title!! Sorry btw for the typos, my crap assed phone Keeps changing english into dutch. Anyway, I got to meet and greet the boys last monday and by surprise again yesterday and I can only say that again youve managed to capture theorie reactions down to a T. Keep it up, Im very curious to see where it goes and loving every word along the way!!
Author's Response: No worries about the typos. I can figure out what you're saying. I hate trying to review on my phone ... it auto-corrects everything. Ugh! I'm so happy that you got to meet the boys! They are absolutely wonderful in person!! Everyone seems to be thrilled that Nick is back (obviously). You may be surprised as to where the story ends up. *tee hee*
Date: 03/27/14 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
I KNEW IT!!! God Im loving this story sooo much!! You know how to capture my idea of how the guys would communicate and Just 'be' down to a T.. Great Job!
Author's Response: It's nice to know that my portrayal of the guys is in sync with your perceptions of them. I know that it's hard to get involved with a story when the author portrays one of the guys in a way that doesn't seem real to you. I can't believe that you knew it wasn't Nick!!! Damn!! LOL
Date: 03/16/14 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Oh please keep on updating!! i am so thrilled to see the recent chapter you have placed. :D and once again I am very excited for the next. you are a great author. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope to have another chapter up shortly. :)
Date: 03/12/14 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1: AJ
I love this story and it already got me wanting more since the first chapter. thank you for keeping up with the updates. please dont stop and enjoy writing this story till the end. I'll be looking forward to more of the chapters. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!! I'm glad that I had you hooked since the first chapter. I will try to keep up with the updates as much as possible ... sometimes life gets a bit crazy. :)
Date: 03/08/14 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
God Im loving this story
Author's Response: Yay!! I'm so glad that you're into it. I hope you continue to enjoy it as things move along. :)
Date: 03/05/14 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1: AJ
I am not sure why I am reading a depressing story as I have been living in the blackness of depression these last two weeks. I swear you hate me going and killing off my favorite Backstreet Boy, this btw is NOT making it up to me again. Very emotional and raw first chapter. You did a great job with everything, so shocking. I can't promise I will review everything the whole way through right now but I will try.
Author's Response: All I can tell you is that I WILL make things up to you before the story is over. At least I hope you will see it that way. :) Nick was an unfortunate casualty, but his death was necessary for the plot. Sorry!! I really have nothing against the poor guy. Although, it doesn't appear to come across that way.
Date: 03/02/14 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Okay so I have never tried your writing before but I must say I am a big fan of suspense. Also love that you are showing the guys reactions in each chapter, the way you did that was very realistic. I am happy to see you have offed Nick in thr first chapter, I love that being someone who enjoys angst and drama mixed with suspense. Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for giving my writing a chance. The first stories that I posted were romance, which I know is not everyone's cup of tea. However, that genre is my comfort zone and I just wanted to see if anyone would be willing to read what I posted. I was so pleased with the feedback that I received that I am attempting suspense in order to push myself to see what I can do. (My friend also urged me to try ... LOL) So, hopefully, people will stick with the story. Anyways, I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it to far!
Date: 03/01/14 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Ooh! Great start! I love the imagery of AJ simply struggling to breathe. Anxious to see how AJ's first phone call goes.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for commenting! I think it's pretty safe to say that AJ's first phone call is not going to go well. I hope that you continue to read!
Date: 03/01/14 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Wow... what an amazingly written beginning! I was sucked in right from the start just from the realistic (and sweet) scene of AJ trying to comfort a teething Ava, but when he saw the news report about Nick, I about had the same reaction as him! Even though I knew it was just fiction, you wrote that so realistically that I felt sick to my stomach just reading it. Great start!! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the amazing review!! I'm glad that I was able to capture your attention right from the beginning. I really appreciate the comments that you made about my writing. It really means a lot!! :) I hope that I can keep you interested as things progress.
Date: 03/01/14 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: AJ
More!!!!
Author's Response: LOL -- The next chapter has been posted!
Date: 03/01/14 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1: AJ
Nooooooo!!!! Please tell me he's in witness protection or something! Update soon!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see what happens. Things will be off to kind of a slow start, but there will be plenty of angst/drama as everything starts to come together.
Date: 02/28/14 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1: AJ
What a way to start a story! I love that you killed Nick (as someone who kills him often lmao) and I'm interested to see where this angst fest goes :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy that you're excited that I killed Nick off. I was kind of afraid that I would have to dodge a lot of "hate" for my choice. :) Out of curiosity, how often do you kill him?? LOL
