Date: 08/02/14 01:59 am Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
Your description of Howie's behavior was terrific! I can actually picture it happening, even though I hope it never does! I'm glad that the guys didn't listen to Kevin, they all need to do this together.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a very hard time writing from Howie's POV, so I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Kevin is not always right ... LOL
Date: 05/15/14 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
I suppose it's all about to become very real for them now :(
Enjoying this so much, but it's getting late, so I'll hopefully be back to read more tomorrow.
Author's Response: You have no idea how "real" it's going to get ... Hurry back and keep reading!! LOL
Date: 03/15/14 02:28 am Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
Ah, a cliffy. Always nice to end a chapter with a cliffhanger. I love the way you made Howie blow up in this chapter. It seems so out of character but yet, we know he has it in him. I enjoy reading Howie and Kevin together. Their chemistry has always been a special one. The only thing missing is Nick. It's so weird reading a story where he's the center but yet not present. I keep expecting to read a chapter from his point of view and I have a feeling I will be.
Author's Response: Howie almost seems too calm to me sometimes. I figured that he deserved an opportunity to vent some of his frustrations. He's one of those people who I can see holding everything in and then losing his mind in the most random of situations. (In this case, it was at a poor rental car agent. LOL) I appreciate that you liked the Kevin and Howie combination. I find Howie very difficult to write and I feel that he is often left out in a lot of stories. So, I've been trying my best to include him as much as possible in this one. To give you a small teaser, you will definitely get a chapter from Nick's point of view.
Date: 03/12/14 05:33 am Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
I like the tad bits of humor you added to this emotion heavy chapter. I guess even the most serious stories need a bit of comic relief, unless I am the only one who thought Kevin's saddness of no one listening to him to be funny
Author's Response: HA! I did actually intend that Kevin part to be funny. I also hoped that Howie's meltdown at the rental counter would garner a few chuckles.
Date: 03/09/14 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
I'm glad Kevin met up with Howie so no one has to do this alone, and glad they're all together at Nick's house now. Howie's meltdown at the airport was interesting; I would never expect Howie to react that way! I really wonder what happened to Lauren. I'm suspecting the same thing, that she must be dead, unless she's somehow involved in Nick's death and on the run.
Author's Response: That's why I chose to have him freak out a bit. I feel that Howie is always so predictable ... it was time to shake him up a little bit. Hmmmmm Lauren killed Nick?? Would I go there?? You'll have to wait and see!
Date: 03/09/14 07:28 am Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
Lmao I died at Ricky Ricardo Howie, that poor lady at the rental place. I also love how Kevin knows they never listen to them but tries anyway. I really wanna get behind what happened and where Lauren is. Good job :).
Author's Response: You'll still have to wait a little while to find out what happened. Sorry!! :P My mom is a massive I Love Lucy fan, so I channeled Ricky Ricardo while I was writing the rental counter bit.
Date: 03/08/14 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
I kind of loved Howie making a scene at the rental car counter. It was so out of character for him, yet so real at the same time. You know he must blow up on some level at least occasionally. I mean, we all do. I also liked how you linked Kevin's observations about Howie's behavior back to his sister's death-- made it that much more believable.
Author's Response: You're exactly right; we all blow up at some point. I figured that the stress of the situation, combined with Howie's desire to keep everything bottled up, would be enough to push him over the edge. The poor rental lady just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.
