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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/14 04:00 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Considering his issues with his family, they're lucky anyone evens talks to them.

Maybe those pictures are showing someone who looks like him and things will be cleared up soon!

Author's Response: Ugh! Nick's family makes me want to scream! I will stop there before I end up going off on some crazy rant.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/14 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 8: Howie

hm something is off with the pictures? i would like it to be that it is just someone who stole nicks life or that nick and lauren ran off together for some unknown reason and this isn't the real nick that is dead but I don't think you would do that. very interesting chapter.

Author's Response: I'm impressed with your theories. Perhaps some of them will be true, or perhaps they won't. You will have to wait and see. :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/14 02:21 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

You did a great job with all the procedural information in this chapter. Writing the detectives and their questions. Yes, I still firmly believe by the time they ID the body, we'll find out it's not Nick in the morgue which will lead to the suspense element of your story, but that's just how my brain works. It seems like Lauren holds the key to the mystery. Let's just say Leighanne did it and call it a day! LOL I'm glad I'm a bit behind so this way I'm not left waiting for an update! Great job!

Author's Response: "Let's just say Leighanne did it and call it a day!" - LOL - I died at that comment!! I'm happy that the bit with the detectives came across as believable. Having never been questioned by the police, I wasn't sure how the situation would play out. I borrowed a lot from Criminal Minds. :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/14 04:34 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Hm... the mystery deepens! It was nice to get a little more information, but now I have more questions than ever! Was that really Nick? If so, who was the guy he was with? Did he really go back to using? Where the hell is Lauren? Ahh, I'm dying to know, but I love that you're keeping me in suspense! Keep up the great work on this story!!!

Author's Response: I figured that I would throw everyone a bone and let the detectives have their say. Although, you're right in the sense that I just ended up creating even more questions. Oooops! You'll just have to keep reading to find out the answers. I know that it's been kind of a slow start, but everything will eventually come together.

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/14 04:53 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Just read all of the chapter, and what a great story! My mind was thinking of all the possiblities in each chapter. where is lauren, what is going to be done about contacting nick's family? and so on...
The reactions seem very natural so that is nice to read. Really enjoyed each chapter (except if Howie was in Toronto why wouldn't he go to Tim Horton's, why settle for Starbucks, haha). Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying things so far. Hopefully, all of your questions will be answered sooner rather than later. I laughed out loud at the Tim Horton's comment!! I should have placed Howie in a Timmy's. What was I thinking?? Although, I kind of needed there to be a slow moving line and a waiting crowd. For the most part, Timmy's is too efficient to have such a scene. :)

Reviewer: MallyMal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: Howie

IF Lauren is still alive then she definitely had something to do with Nick's murder. If it was on CNN and apparently fans know so she has to know. Then nobody knows where she is or heard from her either? If my fiancee is murdered you best believe I will be contacting his family which in this case are the rest of the guys. As old folks will say, "Something in the water ain't clean" meaning something ain't right about this whole scenario. Another great story!!!

Author's Response: OMG! My grandma used to use that saying all the time!! Too funny that you brought it up! Thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad that you're back to read another one of my stories. Lauren is getting a bad reputation, but her whereabouts will be revealed ... eventually.

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 10:37 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Lots of different emotions in this great chapter.

Things are looking a little different to me now.....The dogs food dish almost overflowing with food, I'm starting to suspect Lauren has something to do with what happened and knew she wasn't coming back.

So 'Nick' wasn't alone at this club? This will be interesting to find out if they can I'D who this person is. I'm afraid that Kevin will ultimately have to go to the morgue and make an identification of the body.

Like the equal feelings of distaste in Jane LOL.

Author's Response: I appreciate the fact that you're picking up on all of my little clues. You had to be reading pretty closely to get the dog food one. Nicely done!! Things are not looking so good as far as Lauren is concerned. A lot of people are now pegging her as the murderer. :O Ha! I couldn't resist slipping the Jane bit in there at the end.

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 03:56 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Ugh. I hope it's not Nick! But, fiction right? Gotta tug them heartstrings, and boy oh boy are you tuggin'. Lovely update, always enjoy a new chapter after I get off of work. So many suspects in my mind... Can't wait to find out where you lead us.

Author's Response: You can't tell me that you have suspects in mind and then not share your thoughts! It's not right!! LOL Can you give me a hint as to who you're thinking is behind the whole thing? Please!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 03:07 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Oh, Nick. What was going on with you? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Only Nick knows at this point what he was up to. It looks like he's relapsed, but you'll have to wait and see!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 01:46 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Sorry it cut off my review. Can't wait to see what happened to Lauren!!!!

Author's Response: Ha!! I wonder why it cut you off?? :S Everyone is now wondering what happened to Lauren. It will likely be a few more chapters before you find out.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/14 01:45 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

I am so sorry I haven't been reviewing, things have been ridiculous at work. I am really loving the last few chapters. Loved Howie blowing a gasket, that was very emotional and realistic. I loved Brian and AJ in the car and the scene of Nacho running in not knowing his owner was coming home :( the part with Brian's little anxiety attack made me cry. You have such a way of capturing everything. Been a while since I read anything like this. Excellent job.

i cannot WAIT to swe

Author's Response: No worries, work has been eating away at my free time, for the most part, this week as well. Wouldn't life be so much better if we were just independently wealthy?? :P Anyways, thanks again for all of the positive feedback. I was kind of hoping that someone would comment on the Nacho part. LOL Sorry for making you cry with Brian and his minor breakdown, but it had to be done.