Date: 08/05/14 03:03 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
I have a feeling that it's not going to be secret for very long! Brian having his phone on at all was a bad idea.
Author's Response: Your gut instinct is probably right at this point. Brian needs to separate himself from that phone. LOL
Date: 07/29/14 12:58 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
And this secret is gonna be what gets them in trouble. I can just feel it. But then again if the Boys listened like they should all the time we'd have a lot less interesting stories lmao.
Author's Response: Listen to instructions? Our boys?? Never!! LOL
Date: 07/18/14 09:58 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
THANK YOU, Boys!!! I'm so glad they called one of the wives! I still feel horrible for Lauren, who's going to think Nick is dead, but at least the others will know that their husbands are okay. I enjoyed the banter at the beginning of this chapter about where they were going - a dry county that's known for producing Jack Daniels, hilarious! I also laughed when Brian threatened to start singing One Phone Call because I was about to do the same thing! That is my favorite track off IAWLT! I'm still loving this story!
Author's Response: I also LOVE One Phone Call. I always turn it up in the car and sing along at full volume (but only when I'm alone, because I am a TERRIBLE singer). Seriously, it took them long enough to call someone. Come on boys, get it together!!
Date: 04/26/14 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 19: AJ
I used to live in Nashville and I always got the biggest kick out of the fact that Lynchburg was a dry county. TN is so odd. I think what I enjoy most about your writing is the great way you include subtle details such as the whole RO and Elle thing and Brian wondering if the guys thought his wife sounded genuine. Something small like that just adds another layer to the story. Makes it seem real and personal. As far as this phone call, I'm glad they made it but I'm sure it'll come back to haunt them and I'm sure it will Leighanne's fault. I can see her going to the press or twitter to try to find out where Brian is and then making an overly ugly "Have you seen this man?" shirt to sell or something. LOL yeah...not a big fan. ;O)
Author's Response: The concept of a county being "dry" is amazing to me. I've heard of alcohol free zones at concerts and sporting events, but that's about it. I'm not from the US, so I had to Google a small town near Nashville, and Lynchburg was the first one that popped up. How do they even control what people do in their own homes? Do they know if you bring alcohol into the county from somewhere else? The whole idea is mind-boggling!! Also, your comment about the shirt just made me burst out laughing!! My husband actually came into the room to find out what was so funny.
Date: 04/25/14 08:58 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
This was a good conversation! I hadn't though of Brian as an analyzer, but it seems quite accurate… he's pretty worked up about Leighanne's reaction, and now I think he's prepared to pick their relationship apart until there's nothing left. I feel like he needs to talk to Nick about it.
That was a good strategy to get a message out to the wives, and I think it was realistic--both in terms of how the scene unfolded, but also what they would do, since they still have their cellphones and now that they're away from the detectives, can consider the impact of being unreachable by their families. It's also a dangerous situation in that if whoever is after the guys targets their families after being unable to find them, the wives won't know to expect that or what's going on, let alone where the guys actually are.
Also really enjoyed the intensity from AJ's pov and your description of his frustration at the situation. I just wonder how long this 'secret' will stay between these three…
I've taken so long to review that I see you have another chapter up already. Looking forward to it!
Author's Response: Brian strikes me as the kind of guy who needs to find out everything that he can about every situation. I'm not sure why I think that, because he often comes across as the more laid back joker of the group. I'm glad that you found him picking apart the situation to be accurate. Right now, it's anybody's guess as to whether or not that phone call will come back to haunt them. :)
Date: 04/24/14 09:36 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
I like that they let the wives know at least, but something tells me Brian using his phone will bite their asses later. Google can track your location even in searches if your phone's GPS is on. I like that you grouped them into groups, I am excited to see Kick in the next chapter :p
Author's Response: They probably should have listened to the police, but what's done is done now. The KICK chapter has been posted. It's not too heavy, but there will be some more Nick/Kevin moments as the story moves along. Thanks again for reading and consistently reviewing. :)
Date: 04/23/14 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 19: AJ
please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter has been posted. It's so nice to know that you're reading and enjoying the story. I hope to hear more from you as things move along!
Date: 04/22/14 12:38 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
Oh Howie, you're plan to hear Leigh's voice backfired, lol. They are so naughty not listening to what they were told by calling a wife.... Unless, it helps later because ... Crooked cops? Lol. I'm still trying to figure out who's the bad guy(s) here. Jane Carter is? Hehehe. Kidding! Great update as usual.
Author's Response: Bah!! Jane Carter!!! - LOVED that comment! A lot of people seem to be convinced that it's a crooked cop situation. I guess you'll just have to wait and see.
Date: 04/22/14 12:05 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ
I have a feeling that someone IS going to know about the call and it will cause problems. Hope for an update soon, I loved this chapter. Great job!
Author's Response: Tisk, tisk ... the boys should have listened to the police.
