Date: 08/05/14 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 23: AJ
Oh my God! I want to say that I hope it was one of the security guys but why on Earth would they give AJ and Brian a beat down. The others better get up!!!
Author's Response: How the others are still sleeping at this point is beyond me. LOL
Date: 07/28/14 05:55 am Title: Chapter 23: AJ
OMG! This whole chapter I was wondering if this was for real or if it was really Joey or Tony coming to check on them or one of the other guys out of bed. I'm still not sure, but it's seeming real, so you've got my attention! Gotta read on! Great job setting up the suspense and making me wonder! I literally gasped when AJ was grabbed; I could picture it all happening like a movie!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I was able to keep you guessing. That was kinda my intention. ;) Psyched that you're reading on to find out what happens.
Date: 05/13/14 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 23: AJ
Whoa what a chapter, I didn't realize how intense it was going to be! I thought it was going to be a joke or AJ was being over dramatic but wow oh wow! Did I mention that I am going to see BSB for the first time since 2005 on June 2nd?!
Author's Response: You haven't seen the boys since 2005?!?!?! OMG!! That's horrible! Do they never play in your city?? I'm somewhat lucky in the sense that I live in a major city that they hit during every single leg of their North American tours. I couldn't imagine not seeing them for years at a time. :( I hope that you have an amazing time at the show!! Also, I'm glad that the action took you by surprise. That was my intention. :)
Date: 05/11/14 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 23: AJ
IT GOT ME HANGING!!!!!!!!!! such a cliffy. I read this quite late from the day you posted, i just got home from the province where there is no internet, and this is the first thing i read. haha!! Oh wow, I am very impressed, you write in detail and it amazes me. Anyway, with the story, I am extremely impressed with the progress and I look forward to this action. You didn't let me down, but i gotta admit that you got me wanting more. I have a gut feeling someone's gonna get hurt, haha! Part of me wants that to happen, specially if its brian, he seems vulnerable and is just trying to pretend to be strong for everyone's sake. But its up to you, and Im excited with whatever you write. :) can't wait for your next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Woo hoo!! I'm so glad that I have been able to keep you guessing. I think that most people who are reading this story are kind of waiting, and maybe even hoping, that one of the guys ends up getting hurt. Does that make me and my readers weird?? Nah - I don't think so!! LOL Also, you were in a province where there is no Internet?? I don't know what I would do in such a place!! LOL
Date: 05/10/14 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 23: AJ
Yikes! That was quite a mean cliffy you left there. Loved your descriptions in this chapter. I was really able to visualize everything that was happening. I had to laugh at the beginning because at first I forgot about the room with the two bed and I was envisioning Brian and AJ just randomly sleeping in the same bed together. I was thinking "Hrmmm well now we're going in a whole new direction!" LOL Curious to see who this person is. Maybe it's one of their security people testing them or a good old fashioned goon!
Author's Response: Hahahaha! OMG I love that you had that vision about Brian and AJ. Priceless!! Thanks for the comment about the description. Someone else commented about it in their review as well and it makes me so happy to know that people are able to visualize what I'm writing.
Date: 05/08/14 07:53 am Title: Chapter 23: AJ
Well, way to get into the action! I went from anticipating another 'settling in' chapter, to thinking AJ's imagined 'huge, scary man' was rather extreme, to wondering just who these seemingly multiple people trying to get into the house really are. Unless it's one of their bodyguards that they failed to identify in the dark, but I didn't get that impression...
Anyway, this was a most entertaining chapter, especially AJ's wondering if he'd die in his boxers and Brian's brilliant headlock manoeuvre! Really looking forward to seeing whether anyone else wakes up and joins the mayhem and if the crazy people outside actually manage to get in. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you appreciated the little bit of action that I introduced. I felt as though the boys had had enough time to settle in. It was time for things to start heating up!! Sorry for the delay, but the next chapter has finally been posted and it reveals who the intruders are.
Date: 05/06/14 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 23: AJ
Wow! That action came fast. Was really exciting though. Good thing Brian is not the twig he once was. He put them arms to use real fast. A.J. Would be a goner! The descriptions were great, felt like I was watching a movie. Just needed some popcorn. Can't wait to find out who this intruder is and if he is alone. It would be funny if they choked out like their security or something. The other guys better get up soon and help their brothers. Dang heavy sleepers.
Author's Response: Brian's arms are just ... *drools*. LOVE! LOL I thought that the story needed some action to keep people entertained. I love the fact that you felt like you were watching a movie. That comment really means a lot to me as a writer. :)
