Date: 08/05/14 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 24: Nick
I love how Nick just jumped right in to help them even though AJ is right about the guy possibly being armed. I'm glad to know they can defend each other!
Author's Response: Well, Nick is kind of prone to acting without thinking. It was awfully sweet of him though. He really does care about his "big brothers".
Date: 07/29/14 01:19 am Title: Chapter 24: Nick
LMAO at Nick's response. I should've reviewed last chapter but I wanted to see what was gonna happen so I clicked ahead. As it is if you get email notifications for reviews your inbox is gonna be seriously flooded LMAO. Sorry about that!
Author's Response: HA! I love how you were so eager to click next that you didn't even take the time to review. Now, that's a good sign that I've got you hooked! :P I don't get the email notifications, but I guess the same now applies to you if you get notified every time that I respond to a review. Sorry!!
Date: 07/28/14 05:59 am Title: Chapter 24: Nick
Phew, so it was just Joey and Tony! Great job making it hard to figure out - even in the beginning of this chapter, I wasn't sure. I thought it might be Nick until he, Kevin, and Howie heard the scuffle too. But I wonder if there really was someone else outside because Tony thought he saw someone too. Hmm....
Author's Response: Yes, just good old Joey and Tony creeping around the house. LOL - They're not the smartest security duo that the boys have ever had that's for sure. I mean, they could have turned on a light! Oi! *rolls eyes*
Date: 05/17/14 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 24: Nick
Well, once again my Nancy Drew senses have kicked butt! Now onto what I would do if I were them is seriously second guess having those guys in charge of their protection since Brian - who is gnome sized - was able to basically beat the crap out of one of them! LOL perhaps they might want to rethink their security personnel plus who knows? Maybe one of them is working for the bad guys and really WAS intent on trying to kill or at the least maim one of them. I love how Howie and Kevin just kind of sat back and watched the other three goofballs go at it! Then Kevin says "Eh...who wants coffee?" lmao great chapter.
Author's Response: I love Nancy Drew! Have I mentioned that before? I used to read them all the time as a kid. I just busted a gut at your description of Brian: "gnome sized"! Poor Brian! He may be small, but he's all kinds of sexiness! Everyone seems to have it out for Joey and Tony ... are they coming across as mean?? :P
Date: 05/13/14 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 24: Nick
I wonder if Joey is secretly a bad guy pretending to be a good guy. What a chapter! Epic last line there from Nick and way to go Brian!
Author's Response: Bahahaha - classic Nick with the last line! Why is everyone so suspicious of the bodyguards?? LOL
Date: 05/13/14 06:03 am Title: Chapter 24: Nick
I just started reading this the other day and I haven't had the time to comment yet. I just wanted to say I LOVE your story its so original and I love how you get everyone's point of view its different and I absolutely love where this story is going and I cannot wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It's so nice to know that you are enjoying the story and that you are excited to keep reading. I like that you are appreciating the POV approach. I think it gives the story a little bit more depth. Anyways, thanks again for taking the time to comment and I hope that I hear more from you as things move along.
Date: 05/13/14 01:33 am Title: Chapter 24: Nick
I still do the same thing that you described... All limbs must be on bed, nothing may not hang, hell, I can't even keep my feet uncovered! My mom and dad scarred me with stories of el cucuy aka boogeyman. I hate being woken up by. them Charlie horses argh! Them bodyguards are still suspicious. Now they know how strong they are uh-oh. Adrenaline is a hell of a thing. Its nice to know Brian and Nick would do what it takes to help out a brother in need. Also ver dangerous, but I like it for the story's sake. Wonderful update! Its nice to read before a nap. Hehehe
Author's Response: I also have to keep my feet covered and on the bed at all times. Even if I'm super hot, I will have at least one blanket while I'm sleeping. My husband thinks I'm crazy!! I love how people are suspicious of the bodyguards. Too funny! FYI, "El Cucuy" sounds way scarier than the boogeyman.
