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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 01:18 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

Oh crap! Go find Joey, arm up, get back to the house and call the cops! They need to get somewhere safer!

Author's Response: Dun Dun Dun!! The trouble is starting ...

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 06:50 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

AHHHH, creepy!!!!! I was just going to tell you what a cute chapter this was, until I got to the end! Love it!!! Someone is definitely messing with them. Who could it be? I loved the two women gossiping about Brian and Nick, as well as Kevin and Howie's conversation. I'm glad Howie opened up to Kevin about how he's been feeling and that Kevin reassured him that they, at least, are a team. Team Howie/Kevin! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: In my mind, Kevin and Howie have always kind of been a team. It's all cliche, but they're the oldest so they should just naturally gravitate towards each other. (In my mind anyways). Sorry for ruining the cuteness with the creepiness at the end.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 01:32 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

Oh shit. That's about all I have to say right now. Oh shit.

Author's Response: Hahahaha - I'm glad that the end of this chapter has you all worried. Perfect!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/14 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 27: Howie

Awe, there was so much win in this chapter.I love when Howie and Kevin get a little of the spotlight. Poor Howie! I felt so bad for him and how he thinks he's perceived by everyone. It really must be hard being in a five person group when one really stands out above the rest and the others are kind of left in the dust. Howie does seem like the forgotten one. Also loved the conversation about gay Brian and Nick lol Hrmm...wonder who it was that heard them. Love how Joey just waits in the car. FAIL!

Author's Response: I'm really trying to make sure that each boy gets at least a little bit of attention in this story. I actually enjoyed writing that Howie and Kevin moment. Although, I struggled like you would not believe to get Howie's thoughts to come out the way that I thought they should be. I seriously wonder if he does feel like he is constantly being overlooked. All Joey gets from me is a head shake. He seriously needs to get off his butt and do his job ... properly!

Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/14 09:50 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

Well, I'd say that getting threatening messages directly is much better than receiving them through the police!

I'd surmise that whoever is looking for the Boys got wind of the 'new gay couple in town' story, but I'm sure it would have been one thing, if not another. And this lends credence to AJ's suspicion that there was someone actually creeping around outside, i.e., aside from the bodyguards. If whoever it is has followed them from the house, or will follow them back since Kevin and Howie are evidently being watched in the diner, then this should get interesting pretty fast. Too bad about the lack of cell phones to communicate in situations like this.

Otherwise, I liked Howie's attempt to address his issues about his role in the group, and Kevin's assurance that he is on 'team Howie'. I wonder if this will stave off any future meltdowns... but I doubt it. ;)

Hope you'll write more soon!

Author's Response: Poor Howie. I liked how you used the word "attempt" because, once again, he has tried and essentially failed to express how he feels. I really do feel bad for him sometimes, and not just in the context of this story. Things are about to pick up in terms of the action. I am a couple of chapters ahead of what I have posted, so I have a good idea of what is going to happen next. Thanks so much for all of your comprehensive reviews!

Reviewer: silver knife Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/14 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 27: Howie

And my heart rate shot up... aww man!! your killing me crazy with the suspense cliffies. haha! But still, gotta admit this is what's making me look out for your updates daily. Yes, i am pretty much obsessed with this story of yours. I am extremely curious as who is this guy threatening the boys! It could just be anyone from anywhere. yes, the police can be involved, and by the description you wrote on Joey it is very hard to believe that he is not involved. But to think that the person or men pursuing the boys still hasn't made any physical damage makes him much incredibly difficult to read. I wonder if your story will also be a mind game, as it is physical. because, receiving threats even though the police tried to hide them, meant that the man hunting the boys has ears and eyes watching their every move. and gosh! he just found out exactly where they are hiding right now! he was able to send the mystery letter personally to Howie! Oh, this is crazy!!! but i like it. haha!!! XD im just so hooked! thank you very much for your constant updates and replies to our reviews. it makes me feel happy, reading your replies and of course, your stories. thank you! :)

Author's Response: I'm so flattered that you're looking for the updates on a daily basis. I hope to get another chapter up in the next day or so. I've just finished moving, so everything is crazy in my life at the moment. It's interesting that you mentioned that some of the torture might be mental as opposed to physical. I was just writing a chapter where mind games play a role. It's like you read my mind!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/14 05:35 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

I imagined Howie and Kevin sitting there listening to this conversation like a bunch of women for some reason hoping for some good gossip or something lol! But I cannot wait for another update to see what happens next! This story always keeps me on my toes!

Author's Response: LOL - That's totally how I pictured them while I was writing the chapter. Like, they would be leaning over and straining to hear the conversation while still trying not to draw attention to themselves. :)

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/14 04:22 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

Oh wow. Wonder if Kristen read the note or is a part of this? Cray cray chapter there! UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: The waitress being in on it?? Hmmmm I like that idea ...

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/14 01:40 am Title: Chapter 27: Howie

ok awwww to the Kevin and Howie broment. Yes, Kevin bring Howie back up... Only to have their stalker to bring him back down. I love diners like that, great service, lots of food for cheap cheap. No matter where they this stalker, or is it stalkers, will find the guys. They are gonna have to face this head on. They are not going to get the proper protection from the security guards or police. I mean, this guy or girl, got this close already. Yikes... Again a yikes. Lol. Lovely update.

Author's Response: I felt like it was time for Kevin and Howie to get in on the bromance. The other three have been enjoying most of it so far. :) There isn't any of those diners close to where I live (one of the downfalls of living in a major city, I suppose), but I always thought that it would be nice to have a cheap, local place to go to where everyone knows your name. I love how you ended this review with a "yikes". Tee Hee