Date: 08/06/14 01:30 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
That bastard! I knew it, I knew there was something funky going on! I suppose Tony is in on it too. I wonder about the cops?
Author's Response: Hahahaha! Joey is corrupt! He's super dumb and corrupt ... probably not the best combination.
Date: 07/29/14 07:10 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
Oh man, I knew as soon as you started describing that woman that she was going to be trouble. I was surprised Joey was in on it, though it explains how they were able to find the guys so easily. I wonder if Tony's in on it too.
Author's Response: Really? But I tried to make her sound so sweet! ROTFL!
Date: 07/29/14 01:37 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
WTF I knew there had to be a reason they jumped the dude. It was him after them the whole time. Why the psycho lady? Jesus, so many questions LOL. I want to know just what their game is.
Author's Response: Hahaha - yes, Joey is a bit corrupt. He's not very smart, but he's a bad guy. Figures.
Date: 06/17/14 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
See I KNEW that was gonna happen! Didn't I say the body gauard? Didn't I????? Woot I love when I am right:D Great chapter
Author's Response: Ha!! You did call out the bodyguards as being bad guys pretty early on. It's too bad that I have no prize for you. You will just have to be satisfied with your own self-satisfaction. LOL
Date: 06/01/14 08:27 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
I CALLED IT!!! Sorry for not checking in for a while. Work has been insane and i am usually really good at leaving feedback, but for some reason i have been reading and forgetting to review. Bad Tracy.
Anyways. Eventually i will review the other chapters so i can comment but loving this story SO much. I knew Joey and Tony were in on it the whole time. The first thing that tipped me off was the fact that they were roaming the boys house in the middle of the night. I am really excited for a female villain because you do not often see that (I did it myself in Figured You Out) but there is so much you can do with it. I also love the psychological turmoil you're putting them through. Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: It's good to see you on the review list again. No worries about not having the time to review all of the chapters. I know how it can be when work gets crazy. It's nice to know that you are still reading and enjoying where the story is going! I think I've only ever read one other story with a female villain, so I thought that I would give it a shot and see how it goes. I love that everyone is loving the fact that the boys are going through some mental anguish. Hahaha!
Date: 05/31/14 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
Yay! Nothing beats a good old fashioned evil female villain! And once again...see boys? This is what you get for leaving that house!! Well thank goodness Joey is a bad guy and Tony as well (I am assuming lol) I like the fact that you put Kevin and Howie in danger. The two that the others tend to go to for help. Very nice! And just letting you know that the reading challenge has officially started, so try to make your way to the forum at least once a week. (usually the weekend) to see if there are updates etc... :O) That was my tweet to you! LOL
Author's Response: LOL - Thanks for the "tweet". See? That was sooo much easier than me actually having a Twitter account. :P I debated for awhile about who I would have be captured first. Originally, I was thinking of making Nick be the first one, but then I decided that was too predictable so I went with the "old guys".
Date: 05/30/14 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
YES! YES! YES!!!!! it finally happened!! I knew it! Joey does seem suspicious, who knows, Tony might be involved too. I am sooo psyched up right now. You don't disappoint with the chapters you post. Always leaving us readers looking forward for more. :) Now I wonder, will Kevin & Howie make it back to Brian, Nick & AJ? Or will something happen to the 3 of them as well that will bring them to where Howie & Kevin are. Also, your mind games are wonderful! Psychological trauma is your first tactic with the boys, that will cause damage to their physical strength as well. Now Im very much excited how things will no flow from this chapter onwards. :) Im looking forward for some painful action too. Oh wow! I really love your story. ^_^ I hope you'll post the next chapter soon. :D
Author's Response: Hahaha! I think it's amazing that you're so thrilled that Howie and Kevin have been captured. The poor guys are in trouble and you're jumping with excitement. Too funny! You will have to wait and see if Brian, Nick, and AJ suffer the same fate as their older brothers. :P Also, there is definitely some "painful action" ahead.
Date: 05/30/14 05:13 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
OMG!!!! I knew he was in on it i just knew it!!! I cannot wait for an update!!
Author's Response: Hahahaha - poor Joey, everyone had him pegged for a bad guy right away. Update is on the way, but not until next week.
Date: 05/30/14 01:58 am Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
So, everyone's in on it! It's too bad Howie and Kevin had to get caught to find out. I'm sort of glad, though--this means that AJ's, Brian's and Nick's instincts were right on in the chapter where they had to fend off the 'intruders' in the dark--the bodyguards really were harbouring malicious intent.
This female villain is intriguing. Now that we seem to have met the brains behind the operation--by comparison, at least--I definitely want to know more about her motivations. It seems personal, at the very least.
I surmise that Kevin and Howie are going to be held somewhere until the rest of the boys can be kidnapped, too. If this is a personal issue, it seems that the killer wants to instill as much fear into her victims as possible. Now that she is close to having them all under control, it would seem that the best way would be to have them together to do that.
I like how Kevin tried to keep a rational head in this chapter even though he admits he's just as freaked out as Howie. I think I'm going to have to go back to look for clues in the other notes, too!
I hope the others manage to get their note to the detectives... assuming they can be trusted. :O
Really looking forward to what happens next!
Author's Response: Yes, everyone is in on it! It's too bad that the boys weren't able to pick up on all of the clues as well as my readers. LOL I thought that a female villain was the way to go. If anyone were to have some kind of "beef" with the boys, that person would most likely be a woman (simply judging by their fan base). Anyways, I'm glad that you're looking forward to the next update. I intend to have it up by sometime next week.
Date: 05/29/14 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
I knew those 2 guards had to be in on it somehow! The way they kept getting the notes..too much of a coincidence. My suspicions were confirmed when Kevin and Howie got their note in the diner. And I also thought it was very strange that they would let Nick, Brian and AJ go for a run...alone, even tho they were allowed to roam around freely, which I also found very strange.
Ok..so now we know the who...we just gotta find out the WHY. And also, I thought they were pretty stupid for not insisting that their families be safeguarded as well. I mean really, they were sitting ducks!
LOOOOOOOOOVING this story so much! I get so excited when I see an update and can't WAIT to see the WHY now!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!
Author's Response: Everyone was suspicious of the bodyguards!! LOL I love that you picked up on Joey's involvement during the diner scene. I figured that most people would start to clue in more definitively around that point. Yes, the WHY now becomes the big question, doesn't it? Why would someone want to hurt the boys? What did they do? You'll have to wait and see. I'm so glad that you're continuing to read and I'm thrilled that you're excited for the updates. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside!
Date: 05/29/14 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 29: Kevin
Oh no! They got them. I knew that bastard was bad knees. Argh. How many people are in on this? Why do they want to harm the guys? I can't wait to find out. Is Brian, aj, Nick going to have to come to the rescue? Or are they captured too? Eek. Can't wait to see where you will take us next.
Author's Response: I seriously love that this chapter has produced so many questions. ;p You will find out the motive behind their capture in a little while. I don't intend to give anything away too soon. (I have to keep people in suspense ...). Will Nick, AJ, and Brian be able to come to the rescue? Are they smart/strong enough?? Hmmmmm
