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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 01:38 am Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Yeah, taken by Joey and those two other lunatics!!! Someone better figure something out and fast!

Author's Response: AJ, Brian, and Nick are left to figure something out. You know that it's going to take them a while to get themselves sorted out. Poor Howie and Kevin! LOL

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 07:20 am Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Oooh! I love a good crazy fan story. The bsbcrazies.net site and the idea that they may have killed the Nick look-alike on purpose to get the guys together is really interesting.

Author's Response: That's what you get for wanting to look like Nick Carter ... wait ... that thought sounds harsh when I put it on "paper" ... oh well.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 01:42 am Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Ugh! Don't trust Joey!

Sadly I could believe a webpage like that existed. The divisions of the group don't always work Boys, it's sad it's gonna take this to teach it to you.

Author's Response: I don't think that the website is a far stretch either ... there are some crazy people in the world.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/14 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 31: Brian

BY JOEY THEY'VE BEEN TAKEN BY JOEY YOU IDIOTS! But great chapter. Love how the thinking and detailing is. You are very good. Have you studied Criminal Justice or watched a lot of CSI or what to get such great details?

Author's Response: Bahahaha! Too funny! I have just watched a lot of Criminal Minds ... mostly because I enjoy watching Morgan (super hot! - LOL).

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/14 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 31: Brian

That website sounds like something fans would really do. There is a forum I am on and there is a thread just about the guys nipples. It wouldn't surprise me if people did do something this crazy honestly. I like how you presented the infformation to Brian Nick and AJ too. Brian trying to comfort Nick without words was pretty cute too. Great updates! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Ummmmm how does one devote an entire thread to nipples? What is the discussion about? Whose nipples are the nicest?? LOL I'm currently laughing away to myself and I'm sure the people around me think I'm a complete nut job!

Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/14 07:13 am Title: Chapter 31: Brian

I found this to be a very thoughtful chapter. Or, maybe my impression is owing to how you portrayed Brian's extreme self-awareness throughout... which seemed fitting, given his previous issues you've alluded to and the detectives' theory that the guys' own conduct has somehow become a catalyst for the villain's psychotic behaviour.

I especially liked how you had Brian deliberately decide he didn't care. It's also great the way that Nick and AJ both grabbed onto him for support. He's definitely the 'leader' here, and more assertive in general: insisting that the detective tell them the information that has been withheld so far, for one thing.

The idea that the killer knew about and used Nick's doppelgänger to draw media attention makes sense in many ways; it certainly explains the shift in M.O. from apparently trying to kill them off one by one to now trying to round up the entire group.

Now with these clues about the villain's deliberate use of media and internet, as well as this supposed plan to have their suffering made public, I would assume she has some kind of livestreamed session in mind... Creepy.

In my opinion, how things go next will depend on whether the other detective or Joey returns to the house first. And maybe on Brian's headlock techniques. ;)

Just one thing: by 'rouse'--do you mean 'ruse'?

Well, I'm looking forward to finding out what's happening with Kevin and Howie... if we do get to find out. Great work!

Author's Response: I enjoyed hearing all of your suspicions about what is to come. I find the suggestion of a live-stream session to be especially interesting. You will have to wait and see if you're right. You're the second person to refer to Brian as the "leader" in this chapter. I like how people have developed that perception of him, although I'm not quite sure if it was my intention. LOL Maybe I will run with it ... I do mean "ruse" ... as a Canadian I tend to add a "u" to everything. HAHA!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/14 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 31: Brian

I admit I lol'd at the website. There are a few forums that could easily change their name to coincide with the one you came up with and some people who post on those forums are crazy enough to do something like that. I am honestly scared for the boys sometimes just based on how eerily attached some people are to one or all of the guys. Just yikes!! Well this should be interesting now, to see Joey try to cover this up without giving himself away. He's kind of a moron so it should be fun to watch. LOL

Author's Response: There's no doubt in my mind that some people in the fandom are a bit too obsessed. It seems crazy to me that people are able to develop such an unhealthy infatuation with their favourite celebrities, but I know that it happens all the time. Strange!

Reviewer: silver knife Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/14 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Yes! They finally got the news! and they even got it from the man who betrayed them. haha! damn that joey! im excited for your next update, there will be action to be done! Thank you for making this chapter very detailed. I love how AJ & Nick sticks close to Brian, as if they see him as an older brother in this moment. looks like these kids has got to stand up for themselves starting now. Im looking forward to your next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Finally!! It DID take them a long time to find out what's going on. You're right in the sense that it is time for the "kids" to stand up and take charge. We'll see how good of a job they do in the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/14 02:26 am Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Oh boy.....they are in for a surprise when they find out joey is apart of it!!

Author's Response: I think referring to what they're in for as a "surprise" is an understatement. *evil laugh*

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/14 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 31: Brian

Argh, that lying bastard Joey! Shit is hitting the fan and fast. I like how this chapter kept building and building then bam, slammed the news right into the guys. If Howie was there... He'd pass out again. There's so many ways this story could go, how do you even decide what direction to go? Oh that's right, because you are talented. Blah, can I have just 2% of it? Hehe. Alrighty, super update! Just keeps getting better =D

Author's Response: HA! I am laughing like crazy over the idea of poor Howie passing out at the news! You can have 2% of my "talent" if you really want it. Although, I'm sure that you're more than talented yourself. :)