You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/14 01:09 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

Were you inspired by that guy who had a bunch of plastic surgery to look like Justin Bieber when you created the character of Dan? It's scary to think someone would go to such lengths to look exactly like someone else. I would be creeped out too if I were Nick! It was sad to see Nick, AJ, and Brian falling apart and fighting amongst themselves in this chapter, but I'm glad they got it together by the end. The live video streaming on their official website is so creepy! I'm wondering how Sarah has all these connections to hack, infiltrate, and fool the police, their website, everything!!

Author's Response: I did see photos of that guy who tried to look like the Beibs ... talk about someone who is a few fries short of a Happy Meal! Actually, I got the idea from an episode of Castle in which a celebrity look-a-like is killed because someone mistakes her for the real celeb. For the most part, the guys had been getting along so I figured that it was time for them to fall apart just a little bit. I didn't have the heart to make them stay mad at each other though.

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 02:12 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

Pull it together guys! This is not the time to be fighting. Knock it off and figure something out!

Author's Response: Did you really think that they would make it through this without getting into at least one little scuffle?? Hahaha! Of course AJ was the one to instigate things. Oi!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 02:03 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

And they put it on live stream? WTF?

I'm not surprised AJ lost control first. I mean that sounds bad but it just feels more in character for him to start blaming Nick first and of course for Nick to immediately take the blame. Of course they're gonna want to come apart at the scenes.

Author's Response: It was time for AJ to lose his mind. Although, I think that he did a pretty good job of keeping things together for so long.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/14 04:14 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

oh my gosh i didn't see that one coming! what a crazy chapter but oh so very good. and nick the new kevin? nah nick doesn't have that talent:D

Author's Response: Ha! - Nobody could ever truly replace Kevin. I think that became evident during the years that he was absent from the group. Although, the other guys did a hell of a good job stepping in to compensate for his absence. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I hope to have another one up shortly.

Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/14 07:23 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

I appreciate how you made this chapter, which was basically just to make Nick, AJ and Brian aware of Kevin and Howie's situation, into an opportunity for some bonding / character development. That part was far more interesting, mainly, I suppose, because we as readers are already aware of the kidnapping. But the broadcast of the live feed makes perfect sense in terms of our villain's apparent plan.

Anyway, I thought the 'fight' and the guys' emotional states were well portrayed, especially the lingering jealousy between AJ and Nick and Brian's reaction to intercede on Nick's behalf. It's plain to see how overwrought they all are...

I just hope they can all stick together. Decision-making between three people is so very difficult!

It seems to me that the next move will either be by the security guard Joey, or the villain directly, to somehow get the boys out of the house, or the themselves will have the idea of leaving it for their own investigative purposes. ;)

Your writing is splendid, as always, and I hope you'll have the next installment up soon!

Author's Response: Decision making between three people is practically impossible on a good day. With these three, there are bound to be some major issues. The interaction between AJ, Nick and Brian was also way more interesting for me to write than the revelation about Howie and Kevin being kidnapped and video taped. I'm glad that you appreciated that aspect of the chapter. You're getting quite good at predicating what's going to come next. I'm impressed!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 09:44 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

There were so many great moments in this chapter. It's probably wrong of me that I was laughing through the whole Nick and AJ fight/pity party. It seemed like such a real thing that could happen with those two. Having AJ's inner jealousy of Nick come to the surface and then Nick getting angry enough to use his fists. It's the visual image of them and then AJ and Brian on the floor which had me laughing. Then of course when AJ ends up on Nick's lap!

And getting back to Sarah and her management potential...she even can control their website! At least she's a smart psychopath. Also an incredibly rich one. See boys? This is what happens when you do things like Gold VIPS and cruises. You get rich psycho bitches thinking you are doing it for them personally! Way to go!

p.s.please do not kill Howie or Kevin. :O) If you have any homicidal urges you can fly in one of their misc people like anyone of the Carter clan or Leighanne? lol

Author's Response: I love the fact that you found this chapter funny!! FYI, I just about died laughing at your last comment about flying in some of Nick's family members and/or Leighanne just to kill them off. ROTFL!! That would be the most random plot twist ever ... although it may be kind of funny. The amount of money that some people have to spend on the boys astounds me! I have no idea how people can afford to do VIP at every show and after parties and cruises. I would be bankrupt and living in a box if I tried to do all of that.

Reviewer: silver knife Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/14 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 35: Nick

OH MY CRAZINESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is something, really something! I definitely commend you for writing one hell of an amazing story! :D Your story is progressing wonderfully. I find that this part really speaks about the boys emotions with their "leaders" gone. :) and the chapter before speaks the emotions of Kevin & Howie being the ones captive and definitely not in control. far from their roles as the eldest in the group. Then here comes the push of their enemy/crazed fan. Really? broadcasting Howie & Kevin? It is extremely obvious that she is luring the other 3. and Im sure she's gonna get what she wants if these kids will rush into action. and to think that she uses their site for all its worth! she really wants attention and to let the boys know how in control she can be. also, how will she work her anger? extremely allured by Nick? what did he do anyway? haha!! you got me working alot of things in this story. amazing, I am just so amazed! haha!! truly cant wait for you upcoming chapters. :D thank you for this one!! ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Sarah is totally trying to lure the other guys. Sadly, her plan will probably work. You may be surprised when you find out what it is that Nick actually "did" to Sarah. Thanks for showing so much excitement! :D

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/14 05:34 am Title: Chapter 35: Nick

Well.... If Nick feels guilty now, he's going to be feeling super when he finds out this girl has it out for him specifically. She put a live feed out? Oh man, they need someone like Garcia from criminal minds to help them out! The guys just need to hire some outside help or something. These cops aren't worth a damn. Argh. Lol. Btw, I can't see AJ getting the upper hand on Brian like that. Hehe. But this is fiction right. Maybe Brian was tired from the run still. I am excited for what's next though. Happy weekend to you!

Author's Response: OMG can you imagine the chaos that would ensue if I were to throw Garcia into the mix? I can imagine her and AJ getting along ... they're both interesting characters. LOL - I can't really see AJ beating Brian in a fight either, but I needed AJ to win in order for the scene to wrap itself up. I'm just gonna go with the idea that Brian kind of let AJ win because he didn't want to hurt him. :P

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/14 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 35: Nick

Oh my goodness!!!! Can we say cliff hanger?!?! I csn only imagine what miss crazy Sarah has planned next!

Author's Response: Hahahaha! I couldn't resist leaving you all in some suspense. :)