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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/14 01:18 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

I appreciated Kevin's line of thinking at the beginning of this chapter because he was asking a lot of the same questions I was (and I imagine other readers were too). I wasn't sure if Sarah was really rich and had hired the goons to do her bidding, but it makes more sense that they're related to her, especially since she just said in the last chapter that she gave up her life for the Backstreet Boys, so she couldn't have that well-paying of a job. Anyway, I appreciate these hints at her back story. That was so awful, trying to make Nick choose between Kevin and AJ. And what a great cliffhanger!! This is why I kind of enjoy letting myself fall behind on suspense stories like this, so I don't have to suffer through all the cliffhangers. ;) It was such a relief to be able to click to the next chapter and find out what happened!

Author's Response: I pretty much gave Kevin the voice of the readers in this chapter. Out of all of the guys, I figured that he would be the one who would be the most interested in putting all of the pieces of the puzzle together. Is it wrong that I'm a little bit sad that you didn't have to suffer through the cliffhanger?? :P

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 02:39 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

Nooooo! I hope it misfires and she shoots herself!

Author's Response: I hope for Kevin's sake that you're right, but that wouldn't be a very good ending now would it??:P

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 03:23 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

OMG no killing Kevin!

I couldn't even review last chapter. I had to click on to this one cause you have my attention that badly.

Author's Response: There was such an uproar over the fact that I put Kevin in harm's way. I, honestly, wasn't expecting everyone to get so defensive. I guess it just goes to show you that everyone loves the fact that Kevin is back.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/14 05:28 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

Another cliff hanger:( You mean authors love doing that to me! lol and just so you know, if I weren't harassing you that would mean I don't care. You KNOW I love you stories:D

Author's Response: Us mean authors take great joy in making you all wait to see what happens. Will Kevin make it out alive or won't he?? Should I be nice or shouldn't I??

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/14 09:53 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

I loved how you wrote without Nick they'd
fall apart, I feel that is true sometimes. Lots of drama in this chapter, loved the buildup. Sarah is cuckoo for cocoa puffs..For real. Yikes!

Author's Response: I really do believe that they all couldn't function without Nick. I love how everyone has a different saying to describe Sarah's craziness ... I haven't heard the term "cuckoo for Cocoa Puffs" since elementary school! - Love it!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/14 06:12 am Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

I only have three words to say about this chapter oh my god!!!!!

Author's Response: Those are three excellent words to use. :P

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/14 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

I loved this little passage because I feel like it's so accurate: Regardless of the other relationships that had formed between the five of us, it was Nick who held us together. Each of us had a bond with Nick that couldn’t be duplicated; albeit some of those bonds were noticeably stronger than others. Without Nick, the four of us wouldn’t be able to carry on, and we had all just acknowledged that fact loud and clear.

Poor Nick is going to need some heavy duty therapy after this! SO Kevin actually heard the bullet and not just a click? It had to have been a click because there's no way you would have things come to an end so quickly and besides, you wouldn't kill Kevin! He'd never forgive you! She's all kinds of batshit bonkers. lol

Ooh, I also loved Kevin's whole wanting to put the pieces of the puzzle together too because that's what I was feeling as well. Why do these goons care especially because they have to realize she's one creme filling short of a twinkie!

Author's Response: I also feel as though that passage is accurate. Let's face it, without Nick there is no BSB. He's the "glue" as my husband would say. He's going to need a ton of therapy ... if he makes it out alive. Bahahahahaha! *kidding* "One creme filling short of a Twinkie" may just be my new favourite expression!

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/14 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

I feel like I am watching an episode of criminal minds. Someone save the guys! Wah, where's the bau when you need them. Btw, total compliment. That's one of my favorite shows. I'm hoping Kevin just got ahead of himself and there was no bullet dislodging from the chamber. Someone tackle that meathead please. Girl, you got me nervous though. I need a margarita now. Haha. Excited to see what's next.

Author's Response: I also enjoy Criminal Minds. I should have written the BAU into this story, just so that Morgan could show up (gorgeous!!). Anyways, I got sidetracked there for a minute. Poor Kevin - he's in quite the predicament at the moment. Perhaps you're right and he just got ahead of himself. You'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out.

Reviewer: emeraldbecca1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/14 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 39: Kevin

noooo nooo NOOOO!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, Yesss, YESSSS! :P