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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/14 01:21 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

I was surprised it was Howie who got hit! I thought Brian was going to end up taking the bullet. I'm glad they were able to control Howie's bleeding enough to keep him alive... for now. Depending on how much internal damage the bullet did, I'm not sure how much longer he has if they don't get help soon.

Author's Response: Surprise!! Poor Howie. He's been having a rough time in this story already with his emotions and now he got shot. He just can't seem to be able to catch a break.

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 02:43 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

Somebody get Howie some help! And, as bad as it sounds, I honestly wanted Nick to throttle her!

Author's Response: Ha! I think that most people were probably rooting for Nick at this point. Let's be serious, nobody would really be worse off if he had managed to throttle her.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/14 03:26 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

This bitch is insane. I mean that's obvious but wah! Cry me a river! You made your own life shit. Poor Howie but yay for everyone still managing to stay alive so far!

Author's Response: Why is it that everyone who has a crappy life always wants to blame someone else?? Take some responsibility for yourself, people! The last line of this review made me LOL - Poor Howie indeed.

Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/14 04:48 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

This was definitely a very scary chapter, psychologically speaking. It certainly made perfectly clear the danger the Boys are in and, in particular, emphasized the fine line between a devoted fan and a fanatical lunatic like Sarah. I think it brings home the theme you've been exploring in this story of the fan-celebrity relationship-how it's already a bit messed up and has the potential to develop into something very ugly.
So, I really hope that Howie and the other guys will be okay... you're definitely scaring me a bit, here.
This chapter was great, but I'll admit I had to take a break from reading until you posted more of the story. ;)

Author's Response: Yes, I do feel that some fans are borderline crazy in their infatuation with their favourite celebrities. I know that Sarah is pretty extreme, but I don't think it's unrealistic to think that one day some nut-bar of a fan could go completely off of the deep end. (If that ever does happen, hopefully the fan in question is not obsessed with our boys - Haha!) I've slowed down a bit on the posting, because I barely have time to write in the summer with everything else that I have going on. Fingers crossed that I will be able to get the next chapter up soon. :)

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/14 05:10 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

Aw poor Howie. Iam so glad Kevin is ok and my Nicky but I do feel bad that Howie got hurt.

Author's Response: I figured that you would be pleased that I didn't hurt Nick (at least not yet) - Muhahaha!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/14 08:36 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

Brian haven't you heard the song Billy Dont Be A Hero? My goodness. Poor Howie :( I liked how you threw in a comment about how Howie would have been mad about his hair getting messed up while all this anguish is going on.

Author's Response: Oh man, now that song is in my head! I'm glad you liked that bit about Howie's hair. I figured that I would stick that in and see if anyone noticed. :P

Reviewer: silver knife Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/14 03:54 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

OH MY CRAZINESS!!! This is one hell of a world gone wrong! Oh Brian is really one trouble maker. Though I know he didn't mean it. He just wants to help and protect good ol' Kev. But disaster is bound to happen. This is nuts! Now Howie's in terrible condition to be of any help to anyone or himself. and i can so feel a guilt trip coming Brian's way, I just hope he gets to calm himself and not brood over it, but i have a feeling its far from happening based on his character. Darn this sarah girl! She drives me crazy! You got her character way of the charts for a fan and a villain. She's sooo delusional! what's wrong with her? is she some crazy girl from a mental institution or something cause her way of thinking is far from normal. Nick finally found the nerve to answer her! ha! I can definitely feel the evolvement of this story, and i am incredibly excited for the chapters to come! more twists and turns, more trouble and tests for the group. Its only my prayer they all come out alive... though i am pretty sure they will be all harmed. Gosh!! You got me stuck on this story far to long dear, and i can't stop! so you can't stop. hehe. :) please update soon. im looking forward to it. One storm of hell is coming their way. ;) Oh, and greetings from my country the Philippines, that was just hit by a storm, so im sorry that i wasn't able to review the previous story about Kevin. hehe. Till your next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Wow - you're reading this all the way from the Philippines! I heard about the storm on the news. I hope that you and your family are all doing okay! Thanks for such an intense review. It's nice to know that you are so hooked on the story. Don't worry, I have no intentions of stopping until it is finished. So, you will get to find out what happens in the end. The boys sure are in a bad place at the moment and there are definitely some more twists to come. :D

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/14 09:24 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

Oy! You had a room full of goons who could have been accidentally shot but yet you chose poor Howie? *sigh* I thought this was the big climactic the boys were going to win and only Howie gets hurt in the end, chapter. I'm not sure if I'm a huge fan if this only being the beginning. LOL

Nicely written action sequence and at least you didn't kill Kevin. But yes, Brian it was your fault!

Author's Response: What fun would it have been to have one of the meat-heads get shot? In my ind, it was between Howie and Kevin. Unfortunately for him, Howie was the winner. Although, you should be happy with the fact that he's still alive and breathing. I get brownie points for that, right? As much as I hate to throw Brian under the bus, it was totally his fault!

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/14 04:21 am Title: Chapter 40: Nick

Omg omg! Where do I even start? Man down. Uh oh. Poor Howie. And this is only the beginning according to Sarah? What else does she have in store for them? Shooting one of them wasn't enough. I hope he survives though. How long could he really stay like that? Especially if they've got them all bound, no one to help slow the blood loss. We dont even know if the bullet is through and through. I am thinking into the future too, blood Loss and infection. Ay yi yi. Ok, just gonna sit here patiently for the next update. Hehehe

Author's Response: Good to know that you're waiting patiently. LOL Realistically, I'm not sure how long Howie would be able to survive in his current state. I guess that would depend, like you said, on the amount of blood loss and the potential for infection. Hopefully, someone will come and save them before anything even more disastrous happens to poor Howie.