Date: 08/12/14 02:54 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
I loved the scene of AJ, Nick, and Brian reuniting, but I felt bad for Kevin, missing out again! I like how you're touching on all the different relationships again in the aftermath of everything that happened.
Author's Response: I also felt badly for Kevin in this chapter. I considered writing him into the scene out of fear that people would throw pointy things at me for leaving him out, but in the end I decided that it made more sense to exclude him based on his experiences/thoughts earlier on in the chapter.
Date: 08/06/14 02:54 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
What now?
Author's Response: I have no idea ... *shifty eyes*
Date: 08/01/14 11:09 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Poor fuzzy AJ. It was probably a blessing in disguise that he couldn't remember anything. Glad to see 4/5 of the boys are okay. Looking forward to finding out what the detective has to say.
Author's Response: I have to agree. AJ is better off being a little bit fuzzy on the details. It will probably save him some money on therapy in the near future. :P
Date: 07/30/14 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Ugh this is so good! I hope Howie makes it
Author's Response: Poor Howie. He's the only one who isn't out of the woods yet. Fingers crossed that he pulls through.
Date: 07/29/14 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 43: AJ
I sure hope Howie recovers from surgry! I wonder what is goig on and why Kevin didnt tell them anything. Cant wait to read more. This is one of the best stories i have read in a loong time!
Author's Response: Wow - Thanks so much for that last comment. I am so pleased that you are enjoying it THAT much. You will get to find out some of the missing puzzle pieces in the next chapter - I promise.
Date: 07/29/14 04:16 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Aw I am glad AJ is okay. I forgot to review the last chapter. But OMG. this story is like crack, I swear. I don't know what I will do with myself when I am done reading it. It's so amazing and one of my favorites now. You're a great writer, I know I've told
you this before but you deserve all the attention you're getting for this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and to find out what the cops have to tell the guys!
Author's Response: Wow! THANK YOU! *blushes* I think I've mentioned this before, but this is my first attempt at a suspense story and I have thoroughly enjoyed writing it. I think I may just have to try writing another one.
Date: 07/29/14 03:35 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Gah! And now I'm all caught up. Brian, Nick, and AJ do need to work out that division with Kevin and Howie. Learn from your mistakes Boys! And I'm definitely interested in all Detective Bell has to say. Should be good. Hope you enjoyed the review flood! LOL.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're all caught up simply because my fingers can't handle typing out any more responses!! LOL Thanks for all of the wonderful feedback! It means so much to me to know that you are enjoying my writing!
Date: 07/29/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Oh god...just when you had us believing its all but over..you thrown in a new twist it looks like!!! What NOW?!? Haven't these poor boys been thru enough!! OH THE ANGST!!!! lol
Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve this time for the boys!!!
Author's Response: Good to hear from you again! I'm glad that you've stuck with this story until almost the very end. The poor boys have been though quite the ordeal at this point. You will just have to wait and see if there is anything else terrible lurking in their future.
Date: 07/28/14 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 43: AJ
Wow, ok so AJ's bravery was short lived. I loved how Brian had to remind him what he just said. I blame the bump on the head. Yep, that's what I'm sticking to. Hehe. I am dying of curiosity what the detective has to say. What's this new twist you got? At this point have all of the wives been contacted? Uh oh, does the news have anything to do with the wives? Hmmmm... Ok, I'll just stay in my corner left wondering. I love when I see your updates. Yay! ��
Author's Response: Hahaha - AJ had the best of intentions when he said all of that brave sounding stuff. he just wasn't able to follow through. He's a softie at heart even though he tries to be all rough and tough. You're as bad as AJ with wanting to know what the detective has to say! You will just have to wait until the next chapter to find out. :P
