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Date: 08/05/14 03:17 am Title: Chapter 21: Brian

I have to applaud Nick for thinking on his feet and for being able to eat a muffin in two bites! I'm sure the cashier got more than she bargained for!

Author's Response: Hahahaha! It seems pretty plausible that Nick could eat a muffin in two bites. I think that most men probably could. I, on the other hand, would choke and make a fool out of myself.

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Date: 08/05/14 03:09 am Title: Chapter 20: Kevin

Oh brother! This is going to be one heck of a shopping trip! I think having no one there, a random envelope of cash and a set of rules still seems odd.

Author's Response: You're soooo right about the shopping trip!! LOL The whole set up is a bit odd ...

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Date: 08/05/14 03:03 am Title: Chapter 19: AJ

I have a feeling that it's not going to be secret for very long! Brian having his phone on at all was a bad idea.

Author's Response: Your gut instinct is probably right at this point. Brian needs to separate himself from that phone. LOL

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Date: 08/05/14 02:46 am Title: Chapter 18: Nick

There's something totally fishy going on here. The cops show up with two guys who come "recommended"? They're letting the guys split up and no one is going to stay with them in the house? Why is Kevin going with Nick?

Author's Response: I like that you have so many questions at this point. Don't worry, they will all be answered as you continue to read on. I'm not going to give anything away though ... sorry!

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Date: 08/03/14 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 17: Howie

Holy crap! This is going from awful to terrific to terrible! The cops are right about keeping them safe although I'm not completely sure I trust them.

Author's Response: Why does everyone have something against our two lovely detectives?? You guys are so suspicious! LOL

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Date: 08/03/14 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 16: Brian

Good for Brian! He needs to concentrate. On figuring out what he wants and rebuilding his friendship with Nick. Hopefully, Leighanne will come around.

Author's Response: Yay Brian! He actually put his foot down for once. I'm so proud of him and I do hope that Leighanne comes around as well.

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Date: 08/03/14 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 15: Kevin

Oh crap! I was so busy being glad Nick was alive that the thought never crossed my mind! I'm guessing that the whole thing is a little more sinister then everyone thought. Lauren better come home quick!

Author's Response: LOL - I love that you were so preoccupied with Nick's return that you didn't even see the "danger" coming. You're in for a treat as things get going.

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Date: 08/03/14 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 14: Nick

Damn cellphones! LOL So glad that Nick and Lauren are safe and sound. I understand why Nick felt the way he did and I'm happy AJ had enough sense to step back and let Nick deal with Brian.

Author's Response: AJ's a smart guy. I think that he's able to read people pretty well. In this case, he was bang on.

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Date: 08/03/14 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 13: AJ

Thank God it's not Nick!! Now I hope he's safe wherever he is.

I'm glad Brian opened up to AJ and hopefully the guys can come together to help each other.

Author's Response: I loved writing the ARok moment in this chapter. Those two are my favourite pairing aside from Nick and Brian, of course.

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Date: 08/02/14 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 12: Howie

Is it Nick? I understand how hard it is but they're asking both of them to identify him?

Author's Response: Hmmmmm that's a good question. Is it Nick?? You'll have to wait and see!

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Date: 08/02/14 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 11: Brian

What more can they really say? They all love Nick for different reasons and when someone passes away, it's hard to get on paper everything you feel about them.

Author's Response: So true! Sometimes less is more - definitely the case in this situation!

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Date: 08/02/14 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: Kevin

I hope the police are not trying to say that Kevin might be a suspect! I'm glad he called his wife and got to discuss some things with her. Maybe this will make it easier to deal with the guys.

Author's Response: For some reason, I feel that Kevin and Kristin really lean on each other. I couldn't see Kevin going through something like this and NOT contacting his wife.

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Date: 08/02/14 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 44: Kevin

Aww, I'm glad we got that explanation without having to witness it being executed, if that makes any sense? Also nice to know that Howie is awake and out of surgery. I'm looking forward to reading a Nick and Howie scene. I hope the guys file a law suit against this police department from hell! LOL

Author's Response: Yes, what you said makes sense. :P The next chapter will be a Nick and Howie scene, which I'm sure will make you happy, but will be killer for me to write. I have to gear myself up to write a Howie POV.

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Date: 08/02/14 04:10 am Title: Chapter 9: AJ

Getting older, starting families and life's busy moments can definitely put strain on a relationship between friends. I hope that they find Nick soon and I hope they can mend fences with him and each other.

Author's Response: Getting older and having responsibilities sucks! Sometimes, I wish that I could go back to being a teenager when everything in life was so simple.

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Date: 08/02/14 04:00 am Title: Chapter 8: Howie

Considering his issues with his family, they're lucky anyone evens talks to them.

Maybe those pictures are showing someone who looks like him and things will be cleared up soon!

Author's Response: Ugh! Nick's family makes me want to scream! I will stop there before I end up going off on some crazy rant.