Date: 05/02/14 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very sweet. This may sound weird, but my favorite part in this story was this line... "He nodded, playing with the leaf on one of the plants on the patio deck. He always had a habit of not being in one place for too long, which explains his failure to keep a steady girlfriend."
I loved the subtlety in that line.How it was such a small gesture but explained his personality so well. Nicely done, Tracy. You did a great job with Howie. You shouldn't be afraid of him. He doesn't bite!
Author's Response: I really thought I responded to this review. Thank you so much for the kind words they mean a lot to me. Howie is one of those people I struggled with writing and I am glad he came out all right. I am glad you enjoyed that line as well because it does describe him accurate.