Date: 07/06/14 07:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Awwww finally Kevin's realizing how badly Nick needs love and protection. Can't wait for more so keep updating! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Kevin's a little slow on the uptake. LOL I shall try! I am still 2 chapters ahead of myself. Hopefully I can keep that up!
Date: 07/06/14 05:59 am Title: Chapter 8
See I knew he cared just a little ;) I hope Kev and Howie can keep an eye on him, I also hope Kev will be more of a "big brother" to him as well.
Author's Response: Thanks, let's hope so! :O)
Date: 07/06/14 03:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Awwwe....there's the Kevin I'm use to. The protective big brother is finally emerging. And I've finally caught up!
Looking forward to the next chappie, Mare.
Pammy
Author's Response: Yup, here he comes! Thanks, Pammy!! :O)I always look forward to getting your opinions!
Date: 07/06/14 03:23 am Title: Chapter 7
Hmmmm....what do the Carters want? I know it can't be anything good!
“Because I don’t know man…your brows just kind of like… do the talking for you.” - LOL
You're doing a great job with this story, Mare.
Pammy
Author's Response: LOL thanks, Pammy!
Date: 07/06/14 03:13 am Title: Chapter 6
“But he’s not which is why YOU are here, isn’t it?” - I knew he was going to say it! Again, very realistic.
And Mare, I didn't think that was cheesy...a little heartbreaking, though. No child should ever feel unwanted.
And if we keep getting these terrific little scenes, I hope you never go fishing.
Pammy
Author's Response: Thanks, Pammy. I'm glad you didn't think it was cheesy. That's something I've really been struggling with for this story. Trying not to be over the top cheesy because of all the Kevin consoling that has to happen. I figure it was a lot of trial and error with those two,I just don't want to get too repetitive with Kevin saying something to make Nick mad and then a cheesy forgive me scene to follow. LOL and it is heartbreaking but sadly, I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if he really felt like that about his parents. :(
Date: 07/06/14 02:53 am Title: Chapter 5
Nick has a stalker! And it's a relative. I'm with Kevin....how can his parents not be with him at a time like this?
“I may have farted on your pizza when you weren’t paying attention.” - And what do you say to a line like that?! Great line, Mare, and so unexpected.
Pammy
Author's Response: That line about the farting on the pizza came out of nowhere so I went with it. lol random but yet very Nick.
Date: 07/06/14 02:36 am Title: Chapter 4
It is so strange to see a Kevin so unsure of himself in his dealing with Nick. This is seems very realistic, Mare. After all, the Nick/Kevin bromance didn't develop overnight!
And I love Howie's prominence in this story. Not over the top, not center of attention, but subtle, a lot like Howie himself. Kudos, Mare.
And a cliffie!!!!! Oh no!
Pammy
Author's Response: Well, you know I had to have at least a few cliffies in this one! Even if it's not really a suspense. LOL And thank you for the Howie compliment. I really am enjoying writing him in this one.
Date: 07/06/14 02:04 am Title: Chapter 3
“I had a hard time getting comfortable in that bed. The mattress is so hard.” - When I read this, my first thought was what a brat!
But when I got to this line, Howie simply said, “Sometimes the biggest bruises are the ones we can’t actually see.”- I had to remind myself that sometime there are reasons for certain behaviors.
You're making me think, Mare.
Author's Response: aww yay! Thinking is always a good thing! :O) Thanks, Pammy!
Date: 07/06/14 01:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor Howie....he's the rose between two thorns! And what was the meeting with Johnny about?
Pammy
Author's Response: Yes, he certainly is and you will see! LOL
Date: 07/06/14 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
At first, I was going to wait until this story was complete, because it was already on chappie 6 when I started to read it, before I left a review. But, changed my mind.
Anyway, a Kevin/Nick story....you have my attention...add some Sweet D, I'm looking forward to seeing the dynamics.....and a baby Nick(18 and younger)....I haven't read one of those in a while.
Kevin rolled his eyes. He really needed to get away from the guys for a bit, especially that one. Nick just drove him crazy. Every little thing the fifteen year old did got on his nerves, especially these days. He actually had a dream about strangling him the other night. He woke up smiling. - OMG, I've had days like this!
“Kevin, how awful you felt just now, is how Nick always feels when his parents do this to him and he’s just a kid.” He paused for a second to make sure what he had said sunk in, “Just some food for thought.” - And this is how we do it! I can so picture this....no yelling or screaming, just the facts to make someone feel somewhat ashamed for their behavior.
I saw an interview with the Boys, on the last cruise, I think. The question asked was there anyone in the group you didn't get along with when the group formed. Kevin answered Nick because of the age difference, but he loves the "little shit." I hope to see this transition in this story.
Pammy
Author's Response: Hey Pammy! :O) That interview you are talking about and the answer to that question is what actually inspired this story. I got to thinking about their complex relationship and wondered why and how it changed and this story was born. LOL
I think we've all had days like that where strangling someone would be a welcome thing! And I'm glad you liked that Howie line. His lines are some of my favorites in this story. Wise D.
Date: 07/05/14 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
aw too short of a chapter. I can't wait all the way til next weekend to read more! I'm dying to know what is going on. Thank you for some tender Kevin:D
Author's Response: Well he can't be a jerk all the time, right? Besides this is his coming of age story so as we go along he's going to turn more into the Kevin we all know and love! At least the one we think we know! Thanks, Anita!
Date: 07/02/14 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm curious. Wonder what that was all about. Can hardly wait to find out! So sad that I am out of chapters to read, but great job. I think I will have to go back and read some of your other stuff:D
Author's Response: I see that you chose the cough medicine story lol thanks again, Anita!
Date: 07/02/14 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why would you have doubts on this story? It is AWESOME! It was cheesy but in a good way. I love Howie's little protests and Nick and Kevin ignoring him. Keep up the great work
Author's Response: I think because I'm feeling very out of touch with Bsb these days. Its harder to channel them. The feedback helps so again, thank you!
Date: 07/02/14 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
“I may have farted on your pizza when you weren’t paying attention.” You always did have some of the most classic lines! Lol great job Mare
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/02/14 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
ooo cliff hanger! lucky for me i still get to read 3 more chapters!
Author's Response: You know me with cliffies! Lol
