Date: 06/22/14 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwwww this was bromantic and adorable. *throws Nick's shoe at Kevin* That was for his word vomit! But they really are cute. I always sorta liked their juxtaposed relationships when it came to their siblings vs the group.
Author's Response: Me too! I think it's another reason why they share a special bond. In my head anyway. Thanks, Rose. When I saw all these reviews in my inbox I was certain it was one review just posted over and over again. I was pleasantly surprised to see it was you. I hope you stick with this one! And good luck on writing your new one. Hope this serves as the break you needed!
Date: 06/22/14 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMAO at Nick's "secret" and I love that suddenly this is a suspense fic or at least suspense tinged. I should've known. I don't blame Nick for being upset but I do wish Kevin would take the time to realize why Nick needs them so badly.
Author's Response: You know I couldn't just write this without including some element of suspense. Where's the fun in that? Kevin...kind of slow on the uptake. LOL
Date: 06/22/14 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ahhh one thing I love about old school stories. The Nick goes and does something because he's upset and possibly ends up risking his own life! I love it.
Author's Response: Yup, the Nick who does without thinking Nick.Sometimes I miss that kid! I'm happy he's so well adjusted now but writing wise, it doesn't help us at all, does it?
Date: 06/22/14 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Leave it to Howie to see what the others don't. I really think he's good at that. I still wanna grab Nick and put him in my pocket where he'd be safe :) in this fic LOL.
Author's Response: I agree! I think Howie is kind of observant and attentive to what's going on. Wish he was more like that when it came to his music sometimes. LOL
Date: 06/22/14 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
okay Kevin is gonna make me throw Nick's shoe at him! LOL. Try to understand the kid! Also, Howie is awesome.
Author's Response: ^ and a lot of wanting to kick Kevin! LOL Howie is pretty awesome! and most importantly, present and not just in the background winking at random people. Yay, Howie!!
Date: 06/22/14 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwww I wanna hug Nick and he wasn't even really in this chapter! LOL. Sorry it took me so long to check this out. Basically you know all the life stuff but tonight I needed a writing break and figured your writing would do the trick LOL.
Author's Response: Aww, well hoping this helped. There will be a lot of wanting to hug Nick in this story. lol
Date: 06/22/14 04:05 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww. I love when Kevin tells Nick that he's his little brother. I'm all for good-feel Kevin/Nicky moments - lol. (I have read The Importance of Fly Fishing so many times I've lost count-lol)
Poor Howie being slightly ignored - haha. I call it a pole sometimes and other times a rod - I really don't see the difference.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I had forgotten how much you love Fly Fishing! LOL I love that you have read it so many times! The whole pole and rod thing is Bob's (fictional)logic so there ya go with that one! Thanks, Lenni!
Date: 06/22/14 02:57 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad that Kevin finally told Nick that he wasn't hated and nice analogy with the older brother thing. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! :O) I was going to wait on putting that conversation in there but the boat seemed an appropriate place to include that.
also wanted to remind you about the reading challenge. Not sure if you remember it or not but I noticed you haven't read in awhile. It's my job to be the official nagger so I'm nagging you in my response. LMAO If there's a specific problem, just PM me. And as always, thanks for reading!
Date: 06/22/14 02:48 am Title: Chapter 6
This kind of broke my heart because all Nick wants is to belong and have someone pay attention to him although he's being annoying. I can relate to parents telling their kids they just complicate their lives because my own mother told me that. She's told me she wished I hadn't been born before too and I know first hand how nick feels somewhat. Great chapter Mare :)
Author's Response: aww *hugs* Yes, I think that is what Nick really longed for back then and maybe still does today. I really wouldn't be surprised if his family told him something like that since I always say, he's my long lost sibling! lol Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 06/20/14 01:09 am Title: Chapter 5
I FINALLY have Internet, so I'm able to post a review. Woo Hoo!
The whole notion of Nick having a deranged family member stalking him who may or may not have done "things" to him as a child made me shudder. While I'm loving the suspense and the added element of danger, the subject matter is super creepy.
FYI, the whole farting on the pizza comment made me bust out laughing. I think my husband may think that I'm crazy. :P
Author's Response: Woohoo! Glad you got your internet back! Yeah, always a slippery slope with this kind of subject matter. Don't worry too much though. Sometimes its just the act of throwing an idea out there that creates the suspense. Hope it doesn't deter you from reading on. Thanks, for the review!
Date: 06/19/14 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG so some crazy distant relative is on the loose and coming to get him? Will he be as crazy as nut job Tim who lived in the woods?
I love Weekend At Bernies, not seen it for many years, but I remember laughing at it. And also laughed at Nick farting on the pizza :)
Author's Response: Yikes! Maybe I should make it Tim. LOL That would make for one interesting turn of events! Not as psycho as Tim, but maybe as creepy! If he shows up. :OP Thanks, Steph!
Date: 06/19/14 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sorry I fell behind, I had to wrestle my laptop off the kids!
No wonder Nick was annoyed at them when Kevin promised to take him fishing, I hope he's OK. OMG clubbing till 6am, I've never been able to do that, I'm a lightweight lol.
Author's Response: I know! I feel like a rebel if I can stay up past 11 on my most nights! I have a feeling those two did stuff like that often though. LOL
Date: 06/17/14 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMAO at the pizza thing! That is something that I would do just to piss someone off lol Eeek at the whole distant relative thing though. I like how you're not explicit about anything just yet - I think it adds to the drama. Can't wait for the weekend! (For a new chapter, not because I'm doing anything particularly exciting lol)
Author's Response: Remind me to never get you mad! Lol thanks, Jess! Glad to know you're looking forward to the next update.
Date: 06/16/14 01:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Oye vey. This asshole better NOT get ahold of Nicky! And lmao at him farting on Kevin's pizza!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL thanks, Lenni
Date: 06/15/14 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooh someone sending letters and stalking Nick. I like it lol. I also like how Howie just had to ask about the girls in bikinis and they watched Weekend At Bernies. I love that movie. The pizza scene reminded me of a sound check video where nick rambled about pizza toppings and said he hated pineapple. More for me lol but he totally would tell Kevin he farted on it :p Glad that they came to a understanding. Great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: LOL Weekend at Bernie's was one of my good friend's favorite movie. I could never understand why and the two of us had a conversation very similar to the one Nick and Kevin has about it. I never knew about the pineapple thing, Cool! and of course Howie had to ask about the ladies. He's Howie! Thanks, Tracy!
