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Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/14 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 16

Yes, I think self defence lessons are a great idea, and I like how Howie's brother joined in too, it maybe took the focus off Nick being in danger a bit and made it seem like fun.

I wonder what they'll do now? He can't meet him!

Sorry I've fallen behind, as you know my Tim is unwell (he's also got my ipod so I can't message you!) and so I haven't really been in the mood for much as he's constantly on my mind. But I am enjoying this :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear Tim is still in the hospital. I was hoping he'd be home with you by now. It's nice you gave him your ipod. The poor guy must be bored to tears! Hopefully things will turn around for him soon. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you both.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/14 10:23 am Title: Chapter 17

I am sorry this review is coming late too. I've been sick so haven't been reading a whole lot. I love how you explained the reason Kevin dismissed Nick so quickly in the beginning of the group and his back story. It's great to see that in Fanfic and I think you did a fantastic job.

I want to hit Nicks family because I can see them tossing him too :( sad Nick makes me sad. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: No problem, Tracy. I've had a really busy week myself. Thanks for the compliments! It is sad how we could all see his parents doing that to him. :(

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/14 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 17

I liked the back story about why Kevin sometimes tends to come across as "harsh" and "uncaring". Linking it back to his dad's battle with cancer and the fact that it was hidden from him makes it totally believable.

I was kind of feeling like Kevin at the end of this chapter. As much as I want Nick to open up and discuss what happened with his uncle, I totally don't want to hear it at the same time. *shudders*

As much as I'm loving this story I'm missing Brian and AJ! Hahaha! I think you should write them in ... just for kicks. :P Seriously, another great update!

Author's Response: Aww I do kind of mention Brian from time to time. He made a flashback appearance in this chapter at least. As far as AJ, he just doesn't fit in this one. I'll make it up to him some other time. lol

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/14 04:13 am Title: Chapter 17

FINALLY!! Nick is gonna open up..hopefully. And I guess his parents never read the letters from this pervert! That makes ME angry..at a fictional story!!!

Nice to see these glimpses into Kevin's past..what had him like he is today (in the story I mean..:p). It would cause so many conflicting emotions on being kept in the dark about a loved ones illness. I guess its one of those situations where you wouldn't know how you'd handle it until YOU were put in it. But..I can see myself feeling probably the same way. Anger...LOTS of anger.

Nicely done once again Mare..now, I REALLY can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I would be angry and bitter if that information was kept from me too. His parents are the worst! I wish that was fiction! :-(

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/14 12:04 am Title: Chapter 16

Nick begging Howie to let John beat the crap out of him made me laugh really hard. It was cute seeing them all bond like that over self defense. I am glad you are telling about Kevin's past and showing he has a lot in common with Nick.

Sorry this review is so late. It was a busy week for me, and I'm getting caught up now :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks, Tracy. I enjoyed writing John into this and of course Nick would want poor Howie to get beaten up. lol

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/14 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 17

Mare, I'm still reading! I've been horrible about reviewing 29,000 lashes for me....anyway another fantastic chapter. It makes me want to be like Kevin (anyway good listener and compassionate and thoughtful).

You've done a great job on a fragile subject matter. It will be interesting to see if Nick comes clean with the sick uncle & his family dynamics.

Author's Response: Thanks, Carrie. It's nice to know you're still reading. It's been a challenge to write this subject matter. Kevin and Howie are kind of awesome. Lol

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/14 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 16

Sorry for the lateness of this review. I have been crazy busy lately. Anyways, I loved Nick's admission at the end of this chapter. I'm curious to see how Kevin responds and if he will be able to maintain his new "keeping things level and calm" motto.

On another note, I like how you keep inserting flashbacks to Kevin's childhood and the relationship that he had with his brothers and his dad. It definitely brings a sense of depth to the story and to Kevin's character (something that you don't usually see).

Author's Response: No problem. September is a crazy month. Thanks for mentioning the flashbacks. I think it was really important to show some parelells between Kevin's relationship with his brothers versus his relationship with Nick. I'm glad you're appreciating that.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/14 05:16 am Title: Chapter 16

This was a cute chapter. LOL at Howie being so easy to manipulate when he's sleeping. I also enjoyed the learning to fight bonding scene. Very cute. Especially Kevin's jealousy.

Poor Nick :(. I wanna hug him and put him in my pocket!

Author's Response: Thanks, Rose. I Figured it was time for a cute Howie story. Nick is very pocketable in this one lol

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/14 01:36 am Title: Chapter 16

I hope that they can do something about Don before anything happens!

Author's Response: Me too! lol thanks, Kyrie!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/14 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 16

Nick does so have a choice. Don't meet the asshole. That guy comes anywhere Nicky and my pointy sticks are coming out in full force.
I love the moments with John. He seems like a fun guy. :-) I wish Howie's family would adopt Nicky. He deserves a better family who isn't using him just for money.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!"

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be nice? If Howie's family would've adopted Nick. John is a great guy. He seems like an older version of his brother. Thanks, Lenni!

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/14 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 16

I love the parallels between nick and Kevin in this chapter. And omg that cliffy Mare. I don't know who I'm more scared for nick or Kevin. Can't wait for next week:)

Author's Response: Aww thanks, I enjoy writing those scenes because I really do feel like they are pretty similar, those two.

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/14 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 16

Aww man! I can't wait to see what happens with this creepy guy! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/14 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 15

First, congratulations on winning all those awards! Totally deserved (although admittedly I have not read the romance one lol). I don't think anyone doubted that you would get Best Author.

This chapter was amazing! I really loved it. I especially loved the flashback part with the guys doing weights. I have a vague memory of seeing a pic of Kev and Nick in the gym back then but I might be thinking of something else. I also loved the ending - and Howie's snoring lol

Finally caught up!

Author's Response: Thanks,Jess! I could think of authors who deserve it more but I'll take it.lol I have never seen a picture of the two of them at a gym. Now I'm going to have to go on a quest to find it.

Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/14 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

LOL Howie winking at his mum made me laugh. I'm totally in love with him in this story haha

It's nice to see Kevin pulling his head in.If Howie wasn't in this story I would be very concerned for Nick's wellbeing lol

Sorry about the late reviews. I've been very busy lately. I will read and review the next chapter tomorrow (it's just past midnight here!)

Author's Response: I love Howie too! No worries, Jess. I've been pretty busy too. I wrote maybe three sentences all week. Lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/14 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 15

Really enjoyed that chapter, it was good to see them bonding more and Kevin to be reflecting on past events like the gym. I hope no one does try to get into the bedroom and snatch Nick!

Well done on winning :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! I enjoyed writing that gym scene. :-)