Date: 06/15/14 03:15 am Title: Chapter 5
See and all this time I thought it was going to be something having to do with Lou...interesting twist. I'm excited to read more, as always. Yay Mare suspense story! I liked Nick's secret by the way, very Nick...farting on Pizza.
Author's Response: hrmm well the title does use a plural. And don't get too excited. This one has just a little dribble of suspense. That's why I didn't even put it as one of the genres. Thanks, Sam!
Date: 06/15/14 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Ewwww! Farting on pizza? LOL I'm glad Kevin opened up to Nick a little and that they found him in one piece. I hope they get that guy before he gets to Nick!
Author's Response: *Sigh* I can actually see him really farting on someone's pizza as a prank, sadly. Maybe not now (At least I hope not now!) but back then, I wouldn't put anything past him! lol
Date: 06/12/14 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I bet Nicky took the boat out by himself or least tried to take it out alone. I feel bad for him - but he should realize they could go fishing tomorrow too.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Good theory. We'll see if you're correct! Nick is not big on patience! At least my Nick. lol Thanks, Lenni!
Date: 06/12/14 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Nick. I feel so horrible for him.
Author's Response: Aww :( Me too
Date: 06/10/14 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
So, someone is after Nick? Who could it be? Jane? Some crazy hit-man that Jane hired to take out her son so that she can have all of his money? Sooo many possibilities! - LOL
Author's Response: You know it's Leighanne! It's always Leighanne!! Even if she didn't exist in their word yet, she's trying to kill Nick and ruin everything as usual! :O)
Date: 06/10/14 06:06 am Title: Chapter 4
Ahh! This is why I don't usually read incomplete fanfics....the suspense! I'm thinking there's a connection between the abuse thing hinted at last chapter and Howie's revelation this chapter - psycho Bob on the loose maybe?? Great chapter! I would be pissed too if the people I was on holiday with made plans without me! Especially on the first night! Oh well...looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I would be mega annoyed too if I were Nick. I have a feeling this used to happen to him a lot when he was younger. Hrmm...psycho Bob? Could be...sorry about the suspense. Sometimes you just need those dun dun dun moments. LOL Thanks, Jess!
Date: 06/10/14 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4
I feel bad for nick everyone just seeems to be pushing him away and not realizing the true pain he is in. I cant wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Aww I know, the poor kid :O( Thanks!
Date: 06/09/14 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
So I'm behind on reading and reviewing! Loved the last line in this chapter - makes me think this is more than just a relaxing holiday away. Lol at Nick complaining about the room - if I was Kevin I would have done the same thing lol!
Author's Response: Hope your thesis is going well? As far as Kevin, I probably would have done the same thing as well! Thanks, Jess! And also thanks for being my 30th review. There was something about 29 that was bugging me! lmao
Date: 06/08/14 09:50 am Title: Chapter 4
And here I was thinking this would be a great story, just without the mean cliffies.
Obviously, I was wrong. *sighs*
Great chapter though! Kevin's being an ass.
Author's Response: You should know by now that even my non suspense stuff contains an occasional cliffy now and then! Yes, Kevin is being an ass! lol
Date: 06/08/14 01:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Great job! Howie and Kevin should feel bad for letting Nick down just to have a little fun; they owe him some brother time. I hope they find him before something happens!
Author's Response: Yes, they certainly do! And he'll get it shortly! :O)
Date: 06/08/14 12:22 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww poor Nick. I love how Howie is trying to make Kevin see how he is treating him but of course Kevin is stubborn and doesnt see it. It doesnt
Help that Nick is just as stubborn.
I cant wait for next week to see what has Howie so freaked out about. Great chapter Mare!
Author's Response: Yes, they are both really stubborn. Too similar to be able to get along lol Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 06/08/14 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
You people and your damn cliffies!!!
So D was holding out..something WAS up and he didn't tell Kevin. The interesting level just shot up 10 levels!! Come oooooon next weekend!!!
Author's Response: Aww, yup. Howie was holding out on Kevin but you can kind of see why. Kevin's kind of a jerk lol Thanks, Jennay!
Date: 06/07/14 09:42 am Title: Chapter 3
I love the word kerfluffle. Its so fun to read out loud in a sentence. Just thought I would throw that out there.
But back to the chapter, I love how you made Kevin and Howie both momma's boys because i can totally picture that. Kevin wanting to go right back home when they landed was so realistic.
I liked the image of the guys talking and Nick just letting the water wash over him without a care in the world. I like that Howies mom was taking care of everyone and treats Nick and Kevin like they are her sons, that I could see as well. Loving this so far Mare, hope for an update soon!
Author's Response: Yup,kerfuffle is pretty much my favorite word ever! lol Mrs. D does strike me as the type of person mom that all the neighbor kids would gravitate too. Actually Brian's mom and Kevin's mom strike me as the same way. Thanks for reading! I'll update again sometime this weekend! :O)
Date: 06/02/14 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved the interaction between Howie and his "mommy" in this chapter. Too cute! I also liked that Kevin admitted to being a momma's boy - totally true (in my opinion at least). FYI, I'm dying to know what Howie knows about Nick's situation that he's refusing to divulge.
Author's Response: Oh, Kevin is SUCH a momma's boy! You can totally tell! lol As far as the Howie/Nick thing...You might find that tidbit out in the next chapter or two.
Date: 06/01/14 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
I could just eat Momma D's breakfast as it sounds delicious! I also love the word kerfuffle :)
Sounds like being away from the rest of the Carters is the best thing for Nick, what awful parents :( Better off with Howie's family.
Author's Response: kerfuffle has to be one of my all time favorite words! I use it in school all the time which cracks my students up. They thought I made it up myself lol It would be nice if the Dorough's would have just adopted Nick when he was little. Thanks, Steph!
