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Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/14 07:44 am Title: 5. Jackpot

I hope they make a plan soon! I feel like none of them have any inkling about survival skills in this kind of situation, but I'm glad at least they have blankets and some food. Too bad there's no campfire to go with that, although maybe something waterproof would be just as handy...

I guess it's good for Brian that it's so cold... that should help with the pain and possibly slow down any bleeding from whatever injuries he's sustained. Same for Howie. I have the impression that they're in for a long, harrowing night, should you choose to document it. ;)

I really wonder if there's a particular reason that Nick cannot be found, or if they just can't locate him in the dark.

It's quite a suspenseful story, and I hope you continue. I still have my agenda to plead for you to get Brian out from beneath the bus wreckage, and I think that with Nick's help that could be possible. This doesn't seem like a story where rescue is on its way anytime soon...

Nice work!

Reviewer: ShezAdream Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/14 01:04 am Title: 5. Jackpot

Oh my gosh where's Nick? And how are they ganna get Brian out? Update soon :)