Date: 07/31/14 09:37 am Title: 8. Delicacy
Yay!
Well, I should have known that when AJ wandered off again last time, he was up to much good. ;)
I'm really glad they're going to try to get Brian free... for awhile there I thought maybe he'd be better off staying under the bus until they could get help, but who knows when that will be, and the hypothermia is definitely a concern.
I really like how AJ's being the rebellious one and going hunting for things to help them--it's totally in character. I also like how Brian's being stubborn to the last and he's not so consumed with his own situation that he can't spare a moment of concern for Howie and Nick.
I also appreciate your likening of warmth to a delicacy from Brian's perspective. I thought that was very apt and quite poetic.
Here's to some successful bus-lifting... or possibly finding out what's happening with Nick!
Great job and hope you write more soon. :)
