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Reviewer: ArynjaT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/14 12:36 pm Title: 16. Policy

So I finally find the time to review. And this chapter was quite impressive. I wouldn't be able to write something like that, hospital scenes in general seem difficult to me.

You did this quite well and we learn alot about those characters even tho we have never met them before. No you have me wondering if Brian will survive or not. No matter what the outcome is tho, it will be intresting to read the aftermath.

Author's Response: I must admit, it was quite a challenge for me too. But after watching a lot of ER, I decided to give it a shot ^^ I do doubt that it is entirely realistic though. I originally didnt want it to be this bad though, wanted to shrug the hypothermia off fairly easily. But after actually doing research on hypothermia, there is no way you can soak up snow for six hours and be just fine.

Reviewer: Taya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/14 07:35 pm Title: 16. Policy

I love the random closet BSB fan in the emergency room! It takes my mind off the fact that Brian keeps coding - you're not going to kill him off, are you?! I need him to live and get a fancy prosthetic leg and spend soundchecks making lame jokes about being a cyborg!