Reviewer: ArynjaT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/14 12:41 pm Title: 17. Contact

To be honest I am not a huge fan of supernatural stuff. But despite the fact that the connection is going a bit too far for my taste, I still enjoy reading the story.

I'm still waiting for a new chapter all the time, cause it is really intrestingly written and you give all your characters lines and really paint them out.

I am kinda curious what happens with Kevin now, Nick seems to be angry with him, that would make an intresting plot point. And AJ... I wonder what he is thinking right now... so all in all, keep writing. Maybe I'll warm up to the supernatural stuff as it goes on too ;)

Author's Response: The supernatural element isnt supposed to be the main point in this particular story. I might make a sequel with that eventually though, lol. As far as this story goes, we won't see that much of the connection between them after another chapter or so, and it won't swallow the whole plot point. I wanted to stay close to the characters, without getting too far from reality.