Oh thank you again for writing this. I really loved this chapter. It seems to me like the whole group is breaking apart, because of what happened. I like that subplot and I can understand the trauma, which that event can cause in anyone of them.

I mean one point I have forgotten to bring up: giving Brian alcohol back then only made hypothermia more likely. We learned that in biology, how alcohol is exactly the wrong thing in the cold, it makes you feel warm, but it widens your veins and makes it easier for you to freeze. ANd Brian most definitly did there.

I like the tragedy of this situation, there is nothing anyone of them can really do but exactly do wait. I still think no matter if Brian dies or not, it will be really intresting to see how this story continues from now on.

Once again I enjoy AJ, because I think you got his emotions spot on. What he is thinking only seems realistic and I like that so much.

Very well written :), please keep writing too :)

Author's Response: Yep, I learnt that in biology too :) I think they boys were just looking for a thing to relieve pain, not knowing (or remembering) that it could backfire entirely this way. also, thanks for the review!