Date: 10/18/14 04:33 am Title: 23. Try
Sorry that I first now come to comment! I had quite the stressful week. But now it's time to thank you again for giving me something to read in those stressful days. I really enjoy the story as a whole. I just simply can't wait for every new chapter.
What I particulary liked about this one was how AJ was there. And how you just described Brian waking up slowly. You wrote this so well..
I hope the tension between the members of the group continues a while longer cause it's really intresting to read and would make for an intresting plot point, next to Brian without legs of course.
Wonder when Nick will show up. In this story AJ seems so much better of a friend atm as Nick! Not that I would mind it, I mean I love Frick & Frack, but AJ is cool too ;)
Date: 10/14/14 11:42 pm Title: 23. Try
...I am so relieved, you wouldn't belive! I love how you managed to convey Brian's disorientation and confusion in the text, and I specifically adored the line "Brian didn’t recognize AJ" for some reason. Also glad Kevin's getting some support - hopefully AJ won't hold his decision against him too long.
