Date: 08/17/14 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 49
I love how you describe the after events of giving birth. Totally DEAD on!! lol And I about lost it at cooch bath!! Ohhhh the memories of the sitz baths! Nick is the sweetest thing to her...no wonder she's fallen for him faster this time around. And things are looking up with Brian as well.......
until.....
OMG!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! WHAT. A. CURVEBALL!!!! In all fairness, you did warn us!! But WOW!!!!!
Next chapter pleeeeeeeeeease!!!!
Author's Response: LoL oh I will never forget those moments after birth...ugh! At least it was worth it. :)
Surprise with the curveball! Off to reread your next freak out...
Date: 08/11/14 01:47 am Title: Chapter 48
Ok...here goes!! I found myself giggling and snorting and just full out belly-busting laughing thru this chapter! But now I'm sitting here in tears!! I think I gave myself whiplash with these feelings! lol!
First of all...the names for the vagina party people..I can't even TYPE that without laughing my fingers off the keys!
Second..how could she NOT fall in love with Nick? The way he was all thru the labor. Its not even REAL and it made me love Nick even more! LOL!! Brian totally pussied out (no pun intended ;P) or..he just knows that its going to be Nick that's going to be there for these kids and he let him do the honors. I guess we'll see later?
But at the end..when she named her Winnie...The floodgates opened on my eyes! That was THE sweetest thing EVER! Now...now to see if Baby Winnie makes it!
(But I do wanna know what she WAS gonna name her...my curiosity is so peeked now!)
Nice, cute, quirky chapter!! Loved it Jen!!!!
Author's Response: Quirky is my middle name! Sorry I haven't responded to your review. As I was writing this I was totally falling in love with every single things my fingers were making Nick do---that sounds really dirty doesn't it?
I know it's kinda pathetic, but I can't wait to see your review on the NEXT chapter.....
Date: 08/11/14 01:14 am Title: Chapter 47
Yay! She said yes! I get why she swishy washy, wasn't taking her pregnancy into account lol. Poor Court, of course she doesn't get a normal visit. Glad both the Boys are there for this :).
Author's Response: She totally said yes! Pregnancy is an evil thing with evil, evil hormones...Yeah, I'm not doing THAT again anytime soon! LoL And, having both Boys there will be...interesting. To say the least!
Date: 08/11/14 01:07 am Title: Chapter 47
Awwwwww!! SEE!!! Now there we go!! The I LOVE YOUs are flowing now!! She's finally realized it! Thanks Leighanne..haha! :p Nick calls every night..Brian only once to check up on his babies. Nice job Leighanne. From the looks of things, we are staring down the road to the old life only Nick and Court are getting a jumpstart on it. Which is exactly what I was hoping for!! I really hope you don't crush my dreams here Jen!!!! And Nick's!!! :p
Author's Response: LoL. In Court's defense, the I love you's may or may not be the result of pregnancy hormones. :) But you're right, I want to kick fanfic Brian for only calling once!
Date: 08/11/14 12:54 am Title: Chapter 46
That was so sweet of them to actually be working together for her..and the babies. To put all else aside and try to make her more comfortable. So much less stressful for her and the babies.
And Jane..well, now that Nick knows about her as early as he does now, maybe that will make some more positive changes for him..and the rest of his family, in the future. That's at least one positive out of all this.
Author's Response: I had to have a Frick-n-Frack moment in there even though, y'know...awkward situation. LoL.
Hmmm shall this future include an Aaron that's NOT a douche? Be still my heart!
Date: 08/11/14 12:48 am Title: Chapter 45
Leighanne and Jane...two peas on a pod. Birds of a feather...
Ok..so...Court..your eyes aren't leaving Nick for a second, you're dreaming about a shower with him..hmmmm...YOU'RE IN LOVE WITH HIM DAMMIT!!
Author's Response: LoL can we think of any other phrases for those two? Because you kinda nailed my two avorite!
Okay, and Court might be a LITTLE in love with Nick. Maybe. Just a little. LoL
Date: 08/10/14 07:01 am Title: Chapter 46
My whole thing now is that she needs to make a decision on if she's really with Nick or not. It might help with the problems.
Jane needs to be punched in the face.
Author's Response: Being pregnant and wishy-washy just might go hand in hand, but she should remember where that got her before.
Jane totally needs bitch slapped. That's all :)
Date: 08/10/14 04:43 am Title: Chapter 46
Had a super busy week at work, so i'm catching up on the story!! I love that Courtney and Nick seem to be on a good track! And also i think is good that Leighanne is back, as much as i like that Brian seemed to be better towards Courtney, i want Nick and her to stay together!
I can't wait for another update!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for catching up and reviewing! I kinda love how excited everyone is to have Leighanne in this story and close to Brian. Everybody's got Nick's back! :)
Date: 08/08/14 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 44
Oh Lordy! This should be interesting to say the least.
Author's Response: Jane anywhere near Nick is always interesting :)
Date: 08/07/14 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 43
Lol I hate to say this but good. Let Brian stay with Leighanne and Nick have Court. I loved the old school antics here. I miss that in fanfics. My fave line is Kevin being Batman lol. I know Leighanne is gonna cause hell I'm sure but for now she's serving her purpose.
Author's Response: I should write about group interactions more, because these are the fastest scenes for me to write. I love having them all together and being absolutely, positively ridiculous. I love the description of Leighanne's reappearance. Indeed, she's serving her purpose!
Date: 08/07/14 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 43
Yeah! All is right..... For now. Also Kevin as Batman. I laughed so hard!
Author's Response: nananananananananannana...Kevman! Okay, that was totally dorky. LoL
Date: 08/07/14 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 43
she's baaaaaaaaack, ugh even in literary form she gets on my nerves lol good job John :)
Author's Response: LoL I have difficulty writing her any other way which isn't really fair to her, I know. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/07/14 02:17 am Title: Chapter 42
Awww yes, go with Nick! He's gone through all this for you. I have theories but it's hard to type them on my phone lol
Author's Response: LoL Jen is kicking everyone's ass in the theory department! Haha. Thanks for checking in and reviewing, phone and all. :)
Date: 08/07/14 01:55 am Title: Chapter 42
I'm sorry...but if she picks Brian over Nick..she's CRAZY! Sure, he went a little spastic (ok..a LOT! :P) but she has to realize that he remembers how the OTHER future was too..just how hard he had to fight for her..how long he had to wait for her. Brian can still be a part of the kids' lives even if she ends up with Nick. As much for Ben's sake I hope he does but on the flipside, I want things the way they were..the only bad part is, Ben feels the jealousy of Baylee's presence. OMG!! FEELINGS OVERLOAD!!!! But just listening to her ramble on to Kal about Brian AND Nick..and the way she reacts when Nick is around, its pretty obvious she's in love with him. But my worry is, she's remembering the Nick of the OTHER life..if all this changes, so will the Nick of THAT life and he will be the Nick of THIS life. OMG I'm giving myself a headache!! lmao!! SEE WHAT YOU'RE DOING TO ME?!?!
And awwwwwwww!!!! I'm so happy you enjoy my reviews!! I'm enjoying this story SO much even tho its making my head spin..lol I only seem to do reviews this passionatly when I really get into a story...lol Just something about it that's drawn me in..I think its all the different directions it can go in and being restless for the ending to come to see how it all works out!!
VERY cute chapter tho!! And as always, can't wait for next "Time"!!!
Author's Response: I swore I responded to this review, but I guess I'm going to have to admit shock and awe. Maybe I just had to sleep on my response? LoL
I think I'm going to have people coming at me with lighted torches if she goes with Brian...but that's not to say I'm not crazy enough to make that happen! (mwhahahah). I think Court is MADLY in love with Nick, but I also think she doesn't totally realize it yet. Or maybe she won't ever realize it. Maybe she needs a swift kick in the ass...or something...
Date: 08/06/14 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 41
Okay, so I know I haven't reviewed the past few chapters... but I will get to them lol
Anyway, I was reading this story on facebook about a mother who lost her baby in utero. She gave birth, and had a professional photographer come in and take a bunch of pics, so the family would always have them.
So if, God forbid, Baby Girl Standiford (I won't call her Baby Girl Litrell, because while she may be Brian's baby, she ain't Brian's baby, dang it lol) If she doesn't make it, it would be cool if they had those pictures
Author's Response: Aw I saw that video. Very sad, but also very beautiful and poignant for those parents.
Anyhow, I'm glad to see your review! :)
