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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/14 10:54 am Title: Chapter One

Aww, Nick's thoughts were so sad. I often wondered if Nick really went into a complete tailspin after Kevin left the group. Not really because of it, but because he was no longer there with this watchful eye, but then again who knows how watchful that eye was. Also loved his thoughts about taking voice lessons and they were the first thing they did for him, but not really. I think the saddest part of all, is the fact that we know this is all true. :( I am so glad he's in a much better place. I would have a really hard time reading this if he wasn't. I am also kind of glad that Bean is no longer really in his life. Good riddance to that one! As well as most of his family!

I was hesitant to read this, Miss Rose because I don't want to get sucked in and have it go away. So please do not let that happen! :O)

Author's Response: I felt really bad writing this chapter and was actively rereading his Night of the Zombies chapter so that I captured the feelings I wanted. I do think Kevin had a lot to do with his tailspin because he started to really nosedive during their break before Never Gone, and then really fell apart after Kevin left the group. The sad thing is that it's all true but the bright side is how he's so much better now. I hated Bean, thank GOD he's out of there LOL. I know you might be a little leery and I get it. If it helps I am as of right now, seven chapters ahead of myself and by my estimates (it could change but I don't think it'll vary too bad) this is only gonna be about 15/16 chapters. So have no fear! Thanks Mare, you're the best :)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 07:26 pm Title: Chapter One

Love how you got into how he looked at himself and what he was doing to himself. I can't wait to find out about who his guardian angel is!

Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted him to really see what he was doing even if at that point he didn't care.

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 04:07 pm Title: Chapter One

Ooooo this is going to be a good story i can feel it!!! Great start Rose i cannot wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Awww well thank you!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 11:19 am Title: Chapter One

Love this so far because I loved Divine Intervention. I am really interested in seeing where you take this, especially with that last line of the chapter. Lots of possibilities with this story. Anyways looking forward to seeing more, great job so far.

Author's Response: Thanks, it's definitely got a different path than DI but the concepts are semi-similar. Glad you're enjoying the start at least!