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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/14 10:25 pm Title: Chapter Four

She's right saying the nothing last forever but I feel for Nick being so upset. He feels like his family got torn apart again and it's almost as though he's being abandoned again.

Author's Response: I do too. *hugs Nick* He's been through a lot.

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/14 02:49 am Title: Chapter Four

lol..LOVE Offspring!! That song always reminds me of Justin..they used to play/sing that introducing him before the Q&A part of sc during TIU..lol

I'm sure Nick did have some abandonment issues when Kevin decided to leave..with all that he went thru with his own family. He must have found such comfort in his new "family" and to watch it all kind of falling apart on him..I can't even imagine.

Nicely done chapter Rose!!! Really enjoying this story so much. It really does feel like a biography he's writing!

Author's Response: LMAO did they? I never noticed. It came on spotify and I was like okay this is perfect for 1999 Nick. I think Kevin leaving definitely triggered some problems. He got pretty bad before he finally got himself together. It's pretty hard to picture given that so much has changed LOL. Thanks Jen! Awww that's a huge compliment! Thank you!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 09:36 am Title: Chapter Four

Aww, going back to the Black and Blue era is going to be tough. I loved your line about how he felt like he did around his parents. Begin famous really sucks sometimes. I could never do it. The money, yes please! But all the other crap that comes with it? No thank you! Especially for someone like Nick who has no sense of family or anyone to guide him through what's right or wrong. Yikes!

I remember that video of Howie with Nick saying the picking his nose part. I think that's one of the very first videos I ever watched of them when I started to get really into their music and I remember thinking. Wow, Nick is a little brat! LOL Did the bus really leave him behind? I ask because it seems like a few stories have that happen during this tour. Nice job, Rose!

Author's Response: It really is. In my head Nick found this new family to replace his broken one and when it started to have problems Nick was thrown back into the same feelings being around the Carters used to give him. Especially since AJ's substance abuse and anger problems would've been too similar. I could never do it either. At least not for anything but writing. Maybe be cool like JK Rowling? I could handle that. LOL awww is it really? As far as I know the bus incident never happened but I wanted to combine it with something that did so it'd feel a little more real. But you're right I've seen that idea in stories for either their Euro tour or Millennium. Maybe it's like the Little Man thing? Where no one was sure for the longest time where it originated lmao. Thanks Mare!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 08:23 am Title: Chapter Four

I can totally see nick singing that song lmao!

I remember that video like it was yesterday too, I love the trip through time, it's my favorite part about this story. It's nice to see how things affected the future for him. Nice update!

Author's Response: So could I! I was looking at major hits in 1999 and the Offspring came up and I was like yup, that'd be the right song. I'm glad you're enjoying the little time hops so far in the story. Thanks Tracy!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 05:59 am Title: Chapter Four

I had to hold back my laughter throughout this entire chapter since hubby is sleeping lol. And of course I had to find my pretty fly for a white guy man I totally forgot about that song. There is a picture of Nick out there from when he was younger id say 18 where he looks like the guy from that video lol.

I can see why they left him at Mc Donalds lmao...I can totally see that happening ;)

Author's Response: Lmao awww. I love that song and it's so Nick. I could see them leaving him behind too. i figured it'd be funny and that AJ would be the one who'd see him and "forget" to say anything. Thanks!