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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/14 10:19 am Title: Chapter Two

Aww, this was a sad chapter. I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if many conversations like that did take place in those car rides. I got a kick out of Nick telling Grace she wasn't doing a great job with the Carters. I can only imagine her rolling her eyes when she saw how much of a hot mess her 'family' was!LOL Poor dead Grace. Also thanks for enlightening me on life before Kevin and Brian. I have always been too lazy to look up or care about the other two. I never realized that Nick had always been the baby of the group. I don't know why, but I thought one of the rejects used to be.

Author's Response: I wouldn't either. When I was writing this chapter that convo was originally something else but I was like no, Jane would make him feel horrible for an argument he had nothing to do with. LOL I knew when I said Grace was the guardian for that family Nick's response had to be..."well then wtf, why is it a mess?" Cause that'd be my question too. Haha I didn't know you weren't familiar with pre-Kentucky Cousins BSB. I knew the basics but that was a big part of why I dug out Denise's book and the "official" biography from 1997 lol, so I can re-educate myself on it. Nick has always been the youngest which is kinda funny to me. Thanks Mare!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/14 05:11 am Title: Chapter Two

Ugh...i seriously cannot stand his family..never have...don't think i ever will... I really like where this is going so far :) Cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Same here which is why you'll always see me portray them how I see em. Thanks!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/14 03:28 am Title: Chapter Two

I'm really liking this "rewrite". I liked the other version as well, but I like this whole "Ghost of Christmas Past" kinda thing you got goin on here. I like where its going because I know of all the reserch you put into doing this story and I can't wait to see where all you take us!!

SEE!! I reviewed!! :p

Author's Response: Rewrite and sort of a remix from the original idea LOL. I'm glad you're enjoying my Backstreet Spin on the whole A Christmas Carol thing but without the holiday! LOL. A lot of my video watching and book reading was so I can do my best to really capture the feel of the time periods I'm covering. It's easy to forget the journey since they're so happy now. And yay for reviewing! I'm so proud of you!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/14 10:54 am Title: Chapter One

Aww, Nick's thoughts were so sad. I often wondered if Nick really went into a complete tailspin after Kevin left the group. Not really because of it, but because he was no longer there with this watchful eye, but then again who knows how watchful that eye was. Also loved his thoughts about taking voice lessons and they were the first thing they did for him, but not really. I think the saddest part of all, is the fact that we know this is all true. :( I am so glad he's in a much better place. I would have a really hard time reading this if he wasn't. I am also kind of glad that Bean is no longer really in his life. Good riddance to that one! As well as most of his family!

I was hesitant to read this, Miss Rose because I don't want to get sucked in and have it go away. So please do not let that happen! :O)

Author's Response: I felt really bad writing this chapter and was actively rereading his Night of the Zombies chapter so that I captured the feelings I wanted. I do think Kevin had a lot to do with his tailspin because he started to really nosedive during their break before Never Gone, and then really fell apart after Kevin left the group. The sad thing is that it's all true but the bright side is how he's so much better now. I hated Bean, thank GOD he's out of there LOL. I know you might be a little leery and I get it. If it helps I am as of right now, seven chapters ahead of myself and by my estimates (it could change but I don't think it'll vary too bad) this is only gonna be about 15/16 chapters. So have no fear! Thanks Mare, you're the best :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 08:05 pm Title: Prologue

Aw, nice start. I'll read your longer chapter tomorrow morning. :O)

Author's Response: Thanks mare! I always look forward to your thoughts :)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 07:26 pm Title: Chapter One

Love how you got into how he looked at himself and what he was doing to himself. I can't wait to find out about who his guardian angel is!

Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted him to really see what he was doing even if at that point he didn't care.

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 07:17 pm Title: Prologue

Great start with him talking about his book and hinting at the reason he wrote it. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Author's Response: Nicks book for me was a fanfic writers dream cause it helps fill in some blanks, weird as that sounds. And I got this thought that he can put the truth in there as he's getting it together but that what followed is what really sparked the change :). Thanks!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 04:07 pm Title: Chapter One

Ooooo this is going to be a good story i can feel it!!! Great start Rose i cannot wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Awww well thank you!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/14 11:19 am Title: Chapter One

Love this so far because I loved Divine Intervention. I am really interested in seeing where you take this, especially with that last line of the chapter. Lots of possibilities with this story. Anyways looking forward to seeing more, great job so far.

Author's Response: Thanks, it's definitely got a different path than DI but the concepts are semi-similar. Glad you're enjoying the start at least!