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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/14 04:36 am Title: Chapter Seven

Kevin! You should have left what had been said and explained to Nick you grabbed the wrong phone! You're going to screw his relationship up further now, because she thinks he wants to come home and he has no idea!

And where the Hell is Kristin and why is she NOT answering him!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Kevin you had better NOT sleep with Caroline! Same goes for you Carter!

Author's Response: haha Well this is a first, someone NOT rooting for the main girl character to get down and dirty with the guys!....Missed you and your pointy sticks Lenni!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/14 02:01 am Title: Chapter Seven

I knew as soon as Kevin started texting he had Nick's phone..lol Man, it feels like these two have kinda switched places in this story. Nick is the more responsible one and Kevin is the one fucking up..lol And, Kevin is realizing it! And the line "She mucked me" STILL has me giggling like a fool!

Its always amazed me how it feels like you've crawled in these guys' heads cuz I can always see/hear them doing exactly what you write them doing/saying. Its a gift!

Author's Response: It really does kind of feel like they've switched roles a little bit. Who knew THAT was possible without making them fabulously unrealistic, huh? ...I'm having a lot of fun messing around with them (mucking around with them?)... This story has been simmering for awhile and I'm really glad to finally be getting it posted for everyone to read. That clip of the movie on cruise really helped with a lot of the details of the rewrite. I had no idea Kevin was this fun to write, by the way. I should probably write him more often. lol

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/14 01:24 am Title: Chapter Seven

Thank god Uncle D made it through the cut lol Also, that last line about fossilized things? Brilliant. Made me laugh and I try pretty hard to not feel "emotions" about things so kudos to you. :D

Author's Response: hahaha... It just felt like a very "Nick" thing to say at that point. And Uncle Devon HAD to make it, he was like a shining star in the pinnacle of the "how ghetto fab is Kentucky?" tree. And now I've even been to Kentucky to base these observations on like actual fact, LOL. I'm glad I made you get the feels, and I'll take my Kudos. ;)