Date: 06/27/15 07:19 pm Title: 21. Date: Around January 2nd
I feel a bit selfish wanting him to survive.
I wonder if his "angel" warns him, not much longer, for him to be rescued or for death.... I guess death would be more welcome after the hell he has been through. A rescue would mean years, if not a lifetime of physical and mental recovery, if there is recovery. I don't know if I would be strong enough after that type of psychological torture.
I look forward to finding out if the footsteps belong to the good or bad guys.
Nice work, excellent heart wrenching update.
Date: 06/27/15 05:01 am Title: 20. Date: Unknown - Shoot
Powerful last chapter. He didn't mean to leave Brian alone again. His little bit of hope, gone, in mere seconds. Sad. I fear he will lose his will to live, just after getting some spark back from the news of Nick.
What a scary world. And knowing that there are sick monsters out there who actually buy people is incredulous.
You're doing a great job with this story, keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews, I'm so glad you're enjoying this story ^^
Yes, it's about to become a little bit more sad even
Date: 06/24/15 09:51 am Title: 19. Date: December 16th - Alive
Awesome!!! Lots of updates! :D im ecstatic at how this story is unfolding. Its just so sad that the boys had just given up and took the easy way to rule brian dead, but also given their situation, people juat wnts to move on and remember the good times. I really wanna know if they'll be able to save brian in time before he fully crumbles. Please update more. :) ill be waiting. :)
Date: 06/23/15 09:28 am Title: 19. Date: December 16th - Alive
I really hope the cops find the monster and save Brian
Date: 06/14/15 04:39 pm Title: 14. Date: Unknown - Names
Yehey!! Another update from you! I have to be honest, you have become one of my most favorite fanfiction writers here. I checked every story you made and i enjoyed them all, even if some of them are still unfinished. ;) i look forward to when you write more stories or finish the others. Hehe. But back to this current chapter, you certainly did not hold back on the suspense and i am loving every minute of it. (Im kinda a sucker with torture stories and the likes.) :)) i am curious to know how the other boys will react to what is happening with brian, and will brian even survive what's being done to him? I guess you have to update more and more. I will always look forward to it. ^_^
Author's Response: You have no idea how glad I am that you like the story. I'm a sucker for pain and drama too when it comes to stories. Does that make me weird? Haha, I don't know. The next chapter will be a bit different from what we've seen so far. ^^
Date: 05/12/15 12:44 am Title: 13. November 22nd - Fingers
Oh man, this is a great story. Very heart breaking though. I have no idea who could have Brian at all. Is it anyone they know? I thought that this was a sex traffic ring operation at first. There are so many different ways you could go with this. I can't wait to find where this ride goes. Keep up the wonderful work.
Author's Response: sorry for responding so late ^^
I am very glad you are enjoying the story, even if it is heartbreaking. And it might be someone they know. Not gonna say too much on that though.
Date: 05/06/15 01:54 pm Title: 13. November 22nd - Fingers
This story is amazing! U got me hooked since the first time i read it nd my heart is beating erradically with the intense situation u placed the guys in! Please please please continue nd dnt stop updating!!! The anticipation is killing me!!! Your a wonderful writer. :)
Author's Response: I admit I'm a bit slow when it comes to updating this story, but rest assured that I didn't stop writing it. The situation might get even more intense :)
Date: 02/21/15 05:08 pm Title: November 12th: Vertigo
Good story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. I love suspense stories and so far this one does not disappoint.
Date: 02/15/15 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is a good story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02/15/15 09:46 pm Title: 2. October 14th: Found
My heart is pounding in my chest! Well written! I'm on to the next chapter now! =)
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm glad you like the story
Date: 01/29/15 10:44 am Title: October 20th: Friend
who is this man.....well I cant call him a man becaue a man wont kidnap a other man his a monster and what dose he mean his a friend what dose he what with Brian
Date: 01/15/15 08:06 am Title: 7. October 17th: Another Hit
You do a great job of conveying how helpless AJ (and the other guys) feel and yet how determined they are to find their brother. While Brian is going through the worst hell on earth, the other guys are going through their own kind of hell, waiting for word on him. Making it worse for Nick is how he blames himself, much like Brian does. Great story!
Date: 01/15/15 07:45 am Title: 6. October 16th: No Mercy
I just want to kill these monsters myself for what they are doing to Brian and find myself yelling "Leave him the f**k alone you sick bastards!" It breaks my heart that he grieves for Nick and believes he deserves all that is happening to him :(
Date: 01/14/15 09:17 am Title: 5. October 13th. Eye for an Eye
whats going on what client what are they taking Brian
Date: 01/14/15 08:08 am Title: 5. October 13th. Eye for an Eye
Just read this story now and I must say that it is truly riveting! Finding myself tearing up already in the prologue, I thought I might have a hard time reading any more of it, but you just pulled me in. I hope you will choose to continue on with what I consider to be a very well written, frightening and heart wrenching story line.
