Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Two

Roflmao. Oh Nick. You really need to control your temper and quit jumping down Brian's throat every two damn seconds.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. If he were to leave I'd bawl.

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Two

Ha! I could totally see Nick saying "good" about Leighanne not coming with them on tour. If I was in Nick's position, I would probably say the same thing ... is that horrible?? LOL On a completely unrelated note, the awkwardness of Nick and Brian's interaction really got to me. It felt real and that's what made it so hard for me to read. Why can't things just go back to the way that they were before!?!?!

Author's Response: I hate awkward conversations like that, where you can feel there's stuff not being said and you aren't sure what to say to make it move along. I have those frequently with my sister. I channeled that frustration into their conversation in the restaurant. I'm glad it came off as awkwardly as I was trying to make it feel! haha